Fixed up a few subtitles

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sc2/content/comm/arilou/arilou.txt

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ Do not trust the Orz, my Human Captain. They are dangerous.
 But as to your question... our relationship
 To call our interaction with your kind an experiment would be much too simple and impersonal.
 Let us just say that we have a vested interest in your... development.
-You are one of our... extended family, just as other sentients in other dimesions
+You are one of our... extended family, just as other sentients in other dimensions
 have their extended families.
 We are proud of you as you would be of your children, and some day
 well, I have said too much already.
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ We have changed things... made modifications.
 What did you change and modify on Earth, AND WHY?!
 
 #(IDF_PARASITES)	arilo037.wav
-Our motives are multiple, our desires complex.\nn"
+Our motives are multiple, our desires complex.
 Part of what we do on Earth is for your own protection.
 There are parasites. Creatures who dwell Beyond.
 They have names, but you do not know them. They would like to find you
@@ -355,19 +355,19 @@ The source of the Umgah's compulsion is the Talking Pet you gave the Umgah,
 but now it is intelligent and exhibits strange powers.
 
 #(BAD_NEWS_ABOUT_TPET)	arilo043.wav
-That is very bad news. This creature, a super-intelligent, psychically coercive creature
+That is very bad news. This creature, a super-intelligent, physically coercive creature
 is very similar to a race of beings which was thought to have vanished over 20,000 years ago.
-They were called the Dynarri, and history tells that they ruled a wide region of this galaxy
-for many thousands of years. The Dynarri were cruel and devious
+They were called the Dnyarri, and history tells that they ruled a wide region of this galaxy
+for many thousands of years. The Dnyarri were cruel and devious
 and when they were finally overthrown by one of their slave-races
 they were supposedly exterminated.
-Perhaps this Talking Pet is the degenerate product of the Dynarri.
+Perhaps this Talking Pet is the degenerate product of the Dnyarri.
 
 #(what_do_about_tpet)
 So what should we do about this Dnyarri creature?
 
 #(DANGEROUS_BUT_USEFUL)	arilo044.wav
-The Dnyarri were the most innimical race this galaxy has known.
+The Dnyarri were the most inimical race this galaxy has known.
 In other dimensions, other *times* there are far, far worse beings
 but they do not threaten you at the present time.
 During their reign, the Dnyarri possessed absolute power over all intelligent species in this region.
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ You said you had much to give my people. Can you be more specific?
 #(ABOUT_PORTAL)	arilo045.wav
 As you know, we live in a dimension adjacent to HyperSpace which we call QuasiSpace.
 Our ships move between these dimensions through weaknesses in the inter-dimensional fabric.
-Although many such weaknesses, or Portals exist which lead from our dimension, QuasiSpace
+Although many such weaknesses, or Portals, exist which lead from our dimension, QuasiSpace
 to various locations in HyperSpace, there is only one natually occurring Portal
 which will transport a ship from HyperSpace to QuasiSpace.
 We therefore find it convenient to generate our own Portals artificially
@@ -437,7 +437,7 @@ I have obtained the Warp Pod unit from the Ur-Quan wreck.
 #(CLEVER_HUMAN)	arilo048.wav
 What a surprise!
 As we have always said, Humans are a MOST resourceful and clever species.
-We are so proud of you! But don't worry that you shall have to wait.\r
+We are so proud of you! But don't worry that you shall have to wait.
 
 #(GIVE_PORTAL)	arilo049.wav
 We are prepared. Even now our technical personnel are equipping your ship

sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt

@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ Indeed, you fail to understand: there is no death.
 Only termination and rebirth.
 Each termination brings around the new chance
 the possibility to be born an Ur-Quan.
-We present this opportunity, make it available to all.
+We merely present this opportunity, make it available to all.
 
 #(KILL_BECAUSE_2)	black015.wav
 Our Path of Now and Forever is self-justifying, it needs no confirmation.
@@ -201,8 +201,8 @@ Hold! What you are doing to us is wrong! Why do you do this thing?
 
 #(RESPONSE_TO_KEY_PHRASE)	black030.wav
 THE WORDS!... the Words... the words
-alien, you have spoken the Words. You have spoken them rightly.
-We will explain to you about the Dnyarri our slavemasters
+Alien, you have spoken the Words. You have spoken them rightly.
+We will explain to you about the Dnyarri, our slavemasters
 the Taalo, our only friends... whom we exterminated
 and our reasons why we cleanse the galaxy of all other sentient life.
 We have explained this before, over twenty thousand years ago.
@@ -254,8 +254,8 @@ the creatures you know as our Talking Pets.
 But the Dnyarri were different then.
 They were evilly intelligent and wielded psychic powers to control the minds of others.
 They wanted to rule the universe. We had no choice but to give it to them.
-Our Ur-Quan scoutships transported the Dnyarri throughout the Milieu.
-The war for dominance, such as there was, was quick and bloodless.
+Our Ur-Quan scoutships transported the Dnyarri through the Milieu.
+The war for dominance, such as it was, was quick and bloodless.
 Within weeks, the Dnyarri controlled all races but one... the Taalo.
 
 #(how_leave_me_alone)
@@ -267,18 +267,18 @@ Like the five other surviving races of the old Milieu, we had no choice.
 The Dnyarri's compulsion was too strong to resist.
 But the Dnyarri were not satisfied with their slave races.
 The Yuli and the Drall were inferior, they decided
-so they instructed us to incinerate their worlds, and we did.
+and so they instructed us to incinerate their worlds, and we did.
 The Dnyarri had a special liking for us Ur-Quan
 so they began to tinker with our genes... to improve us, their favored slaves.
-Their efforts split the Ur-Quan into two sub-races.
+Their efforts split the Ur-Quan into two sub-races
 The Green Ur-Quan, effete scientists and bureaucrats
 and the Black Ur-Quan, their Effectuators, the builders, the fighters, the doers.
-The Kohr-Ah are the Black Ur-Quan. The Kzer-Ta are the Green.
+The Kohr-Ah are the Black Ur-Quan. The Kzer-Za are the Green.
 I grow tired of talking, alien, and your time grows short.
 I will continue for but a moment longer.
 When we discovered that intense pain could block the Dnyarri's mental powers
 we were able to destroy them, but it took years.
-Can you imagine, alien, what it must have been like to wear an excruciator?
+Can you imagine, alien, what it must have been like to wear an Excruciator?
 To live in endless screaming pain for months on end? No you cannot.
 
 #(guess_thats_all)
@@ -299,8 +299,8 @@ While we fought, the Mael-Num escaped. We never found them again.
 When our battle was done, we, the Kohr-Ah, were defeated
 however, the Kzer-Za let us go. We were exiled.
 We travelled through space, rebuilt the strength of our battle fleets
-continued our plan, to cleanse threats from the galaxy, for all Ur-Quan.
-You have heard our words, and perhaps now you understand us a bit better.
+and continued our plan, to cleanse threats from the galaxy, for all Ur-Quan.
+You have heard our words, and perhaps you understand us a bit better.
 But now, it is time for us to cleanse you.
 
 #(what_are_you_hovering_over)
@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@ unless they are accidentally vaporized.
 You sure are creepy.
 
 #(YES_CREEPY)	black037.wav
-Seeing that I represent your imminent termination
+Seeing that I represent your imminent death
 as well as the termination of your entire species
 I think your fear is well justified.
 Nonetheless, you require cleansing.

sc2/content/comm/chmmr/chmmr.txt

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ to give you the opportunity to use the weapon.
 I seem to have acquired a Dnyarri. What do you make of it?
 
 #(SCARY_BUT_USEFUL)	chmmr010.wav
-we know the dnyarii only from legend
+we know the dnyarri only from legend
 where they are described as the embodiment of evil and cruelty
 if ever there was a devil, captain, it was the dnyarri
 however, if in fact the creature you possess is one of this ancient breed
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ You seem to have superior technology. Would you share this with us?
 #(USE_OUR_SHIPS_BEFORE)	chmmr029.wav
 WE WILL PROVIDE YOU WITH THE DESIGNS FOR A NEW CLASS OF FIGHTING SHIP... THE AVATAR
 ALONG WITH ENOUGH CHMMR TO COMMAND HOWEVER MANY VESSELS YOU MAY BUILD.
-AVATAR BATTLESHIPS ARE MUCH MORE EFFECTIVE THAN OUR BROODHOME OF X-FORM VESSELS.
+AVATAR BATTLESHIPS ARE MUCH MORE EFFECTIVE THAN OUR BROODHOME OR X-FORM VESSELS.
 IN COMPETENT HANDS, THESE SHIPS CAN DEFEAT ANY SHIP IN SPACE.
 
 #(where_weapon)
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ ONE: THE LOCATION OF THE SA-MATRA CAN BE CONFINED TO THE STARS IN THE CRATERIS C
 SEEK THE VEHICLE IN THIS REGION.
 TWO: BECAUSE THE UR-QUAN LOST SO MANY SHIPS WHEN THE SHOFIXTI CAUSED THEIR OWN SUN TO FLARE
 THE KOHR-AH'S FORCES ARE GROSSLY SUPERIOR TO THE UR-QUAN.
-IF THE WAR IS NOT YET OVER BETWEEN THE UR-QUAN AND THE KOHR-AH, IT SHALL BE SOON
+IF THE WAR IS NOT OVER BETWEEN THE UR-QUAN AND THE KOHR-AH, IT SHALL BE SOON
 WITH THE KOHR-AH VICTORIOUS. WHEN THIS HAPPENS THE KOHR-AH WILL MOVE THROUGH SPACE
 DESTROYING ALL INTELLIGENT RACES ONE BY ONE UNTIL NONE REMAIN.
 YOU MUST NOT BE DISTRACTED! THE SA-MATRA IS THE KEY TO THEIR DOMINANCE!