Comm fixes.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/sc2/code/trunk@1735 8092fc87-c524-0410-9efc-e669fe64eaf9
2005-05-10 20:01:36 +00:00
parent ea02e50558
commit c5d7e7d933
2 changed files with 40 additions and 49 deletions
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 #(HOSTILE_KATANA_2) 4657
 #(HOSTILE_KATANA_3) 3254,2023,2774
 #(HOSTILE_KATANA_4) 
-#(HOSTILE_TANAKA_1) 2113,3355,3955,2003,2744,3896,5227,1612,1793
+#(HOSTILE_TANAKA_1) 2325,3309,4029,4356,4572,5078,1441,2289
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_2) 4637,5057,4317
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_3) 
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_4) 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_7) 
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_8) 
 #(dont_attack) 
-#(TYPICAL_PLOY) 4256
+#(TYPICAL_PLOY) 4419,2950
 #(hey_stop) 
 #(ONLY_STOP) 2744
 #(look_you_are) 
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 #(yes_and_no) 
 #(butt_blasted) 
 #(clobbered) 
-#(VERY_SAD_KILL_SELF) 1472,1272,801,3475
+#(VERY_SAD_KILL_SELF) 3631,3828
 #(important_duty) 
 #(WHAT_DUTY) 
 #(need_you_for_duty) 
@@ -81,18 +81,15 @@
 #(where_world) 
 #(BLEW_IT_UP) 3155,4707
 #(how_survive) 
-#(NOT_HERE) 2583,7201,5728,5568,5398,6599,5708,7351,6730,5397
+#(NOT_HERE) 2992,7113,6117,3262,7367,6369,5928,7559,6758,4499,4429
 #(what_happened) 
 #(MET_VUX) 3936,6369,3535,6099,5137,6129,5378,2683
 #(glory_device) 
 #(SWITCH_BROKE) 4416,2654
 #(bye) 
 #(GOODBYE) 
-#(FRIENDLY_HELLO0) 
+#(FRIENDLY_HELLO) 
 #(FRIENDLY_HELLO1) 
 #(FRIENDLY_HELLO2) 
 #(report0) 
 #(report1) 
-#(NOTHING_NEW0) 
+#(NOTHING_NEW) 
 #(NOTHING_NEW1) 
 #(OUT_TAKES) 3500,6000,3000,3000,3500,4000,3000,3000,3500,4000
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Tanaka
 Katana
 #(HOSTILE_KATANA_1)	shofi002.ogg
-I, Katana the Warrior, have travelled for long years through space to finally come home
+I, Katana the Warrior, have travelled for long years through space, finally to come home
 only to witness you blasting my brother to atoms!
 Now you die!
@@ -39,8 +39,8 @@ I swear by the hero, Daikon, this time I will kill you.
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_1)	shofi006.ogg
 Attention huge alien vessel!
 Though most of my sensory instruments are malfunctioning
-my mass indicator shows the huge size vessel
+my mass indicator shows the huge size of your vessel
-revealing that you are none other
+revealing you are none other
 than a disgusting Ur-Quan slimewad!
 I am the glorious Shofixti warrior Tanaka.
 You killed my father... my mother... my many brothers
@@ -50,9 +50,9 @@ Prepare to die!
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_2)	shofi007.ogg
 Ah, so the cowardly slug-spawn has returned!
-You were most fortunate last time, you hideous, pouchless freak
+You were most fortunate last time, you hideous, pouchless freak!
-but this time I shall surely destroy your vessel
+But this time I shall surely destroy your vessel
-you slithering eater of putrid hairballs.
+you slithering eater of putrid hairballs!
 #(HOSTILE_TANAKA_3)	shofi008.ogg
 I see you're back for even more humiliation, you flatulent, Ur-Quan pus-cup.
@@ -77,13 +77,14 @@ Don't attack -- we're not the Ur-Quan! We're your allies!
 #(TYPICAL_PLOY)	shofi014.ogg
 A typical Ur-Quan gambit... which has failed.
-And now I howl the scream of death -- Kyaiee!
+And now I howl the scream of death!
 Kyaiee!
 #(hey_stop)
 Hey, stop shooting! Someone could get hurt!
 #(ONLY_STOP)	shofi015.ogg
-I will only stop when you are dead.
+I will only stop when you are dead!
 Kyaiee!
 #(look_you_are)
@@ -97,7 +98,7 @@ Kyaiee!
 Don't you know the war is over?
 #(NEVER)	shofi017.ogg
-For me it will never be over.
+For me it will never be over!
 Kyaiee!
 #(look0)
@@ -106,7 +107,7 @@ Look
 , the war is over -- really!
 #(FOR_YOU)	shofi018.ogg
-For you perhaps, fat cowardly lard-log.
+For you perhaps, fat cowardly lard-log!
 Kyaiee!
 #(no_bloodshed)
@@ -121,19 +122,19 @@ Kyaiee!
 Gee, if that's the way you feel, then I'll be on my way.
 #(MUST_FIGHT_YOU_URQUAN_1)	shofi020.ogg
-Oh no you don't
+Oh no you don't!
 Kyaiee!
 #(MUST_FIGHT_YOU_URQUAN_2)	shofi021.ogg
-Oh no you don't
+Oh no you don't!
 Kyaiee!
 #(MUST_FIGHT_YOU_URQUAN_3)	shofi022.ogg
-Oh no you don't
+Oh no you don't!
 Kyaiee!
 #(MUST_FIGHT_YOU_URQUAN_4)	shofi023.ogg
-Oh no you don't
+Oh no you don't!
 Kyaiee!
 #(no_one_insults)
@@ -185,11 +186,11 @@ When you failed to launch fighter craft, I should have guessed.
 Just one of those mistakes you make in war...
 #(NICE_BUT_WHAT_IS_DONKEY)	shofi029.ogg
-Ah, Earth humor! Very funny . Ha-ha-ha!
+Ah, Earth humor! Very funny! Ha-ha-ha!
 But what is don...
 #(IS_DEFEAT_TRUE)	shofi030.ogg
-Suddenly your words ring in my ears...`the war is over.'
+Suddenly your words ring in my ears.
 Captain, is this true? Have the Ur-Quan been destroyed?
 Has the ultimate sacrifice of my people resulted in freedom for the Alliance?
@@ -204,8 +205,6 @@ Er... maybe we should talk about this later.
 #(VERY_SAD_KILL_SELF)	shofi031.ogg
 HYAIEEE!
 GYAIEEE!
 IEEE!
 I am a defeated warrior! A worthless shell!
 I must die!!!!
@@ -232,7 +231,7 @@ Like what?!
 My race is dead. My world is an airless rock. And I've seen all my FunRoms at least a hundred times.
 My life is over.
 I have already picked out a nice asteroid to smash into
-so if you don't mind, I'll just go destroy myself.
+so if you don't mind, I'll just go and kill myself.
 Unless you want to annihilate me yourself.
 #(go_ahead)
@@ -306,23 +305,24 @@ Where is your life-filled homeworld, Kyabetsu?
 #(BLEW_IT_UP)	shofi039.ogg
 My people blew up the sun, heh, heh, heh!
 Or at least they caused it to flare like a nova, destroying the many hundreds of
-Hierarchy vessels that had invaded our system to enslave the Shofixti.
+Hierarchy vessels that had invaded our system to enslave us Shofixti.
 #(how_survive)
 If your sun went nova, how did you survive?
 #(NOT_HERE)	shofi040.ogg
 I wasn't here when they made the sun flare.
-I was assigned to a Yahat squadron as a forward scout performing a deep recon in Mycon space.
+I was assigned to a Yehat squadron as a forward scout performing a deep recon in Mycon space.
 We were sent to investigate reports of unusual Mycon activity around Beta Brahe.
-I was the first ship to enter the system. My scanners showed a small fleet showed a
+I was the first ship to enter the system.
-small fleet of Mycon vessels clustered around the planet conducting a test of some a device.
+My scanners showed a small fleet of Mycon clustered around the planet conducting a test of some device.
-The unit was small, not even half the size of a ship. When the Mycon activated it
+The unit was small, not even half the size of my ship.
-a glow began radiating outward. I crept closer, to get a better look.
+When the Mycon activated it a glow began to radiate outward.
 I crept closer, to get a better look.
 Suddenly there was a flare, like a newborn sun, blinding me and overloading my sensors.
 When I recovered my vision, hours later, the Mycon and their device were gone.
-I was able to affect repairs to my ship and depart the systems but I had been
+I was able to affect repairs on my sensors and depart the system
-cut off from my squadron, and had to travel home alone.
+but I had been cut off from my squadron, and had to travel home alone.
 #(what_happened)
 So what happened to your ship?
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ I did find one thing interesting though as I skimmed through the edge of Yehat s
 I dropped into Zeta Sextantis to re-charge some of my depleted energy cells
 so I moved into the extreme inner system. There, right next to the sun
 I found a very strange planet... it messed up my sensors somehow
-that's why I couldn't recognize your ship at first.
+that's why I could not recognize your ship at first.
 I'd never seen a planet like that before, so maybe you should investigate?
 #(glory_device)
@@ -343,7 +343,7 @@ When we were fighting, why didn't you use your Glory Device?
 #(SWITCH_BROKE)	shofi042.ogg
 During my battle with the VUX, I decided to employ the weapon.
-I guess I used too much gusto
+But I guess I used too much gusto
 and the switch broke.
 #(bye)
@@ -352,24 +352,18 @@ Goodbye, Tanaka.
 #(GOODBYE)	shofi043.ogg
 Good hunting.
-#(FRIENDLY_HELLO0)	shofi044.ogg
+#(FRIENDLY_HELLO)	shofi044.ogg
-Greetings Captain 
+Greetings Captain. It is good to see you again.
 #(FRIENDLY_HELLO1)
 . It is good to see you and the 
 #(FRIENDLY_HELLO2)
 again.
 #(report0)
 What's your report 
 #(report1)
 ?
-#(NOTHING_NEW0)	shofi045.ogg
+#(NOTHING_NEW)	shofi045.ogg
-Nothing new to report 
+Nothing new to report, sir.
 #(NOTHING_NEW1)
 , sir.
-#(OUT_TAKES) shofi046.ogg
+#(OUT_TAKES)
 Ah, I see someone approaches, but who is it?
 Ho, ho! It is the creature which I wrongly called a disgusting Ur-Quan slimewad...
 ...and a cowardly slug-spawn...