Spelling and punctuation pass (bug #1200)
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@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Our origins and purposes are, frankly, mysterious and due to several unavoidable
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we are unable to discuss ourselves in any great detail.
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#(what_factors)
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What are these 'unavoidable factors'?
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What are these `unavoidable factors'?
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#(FACTORS_ARE) melnorme-006.ogg
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First and foremost among these factors
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@@ -686,7 +686,7 @@ Although it is probably too early to tell, it would appear that the Kohr-Ah are
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No doubt you are familiar with an alien race called the Umgah who live in the Orionis constellation.
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While they are renowned for their potent and often cruel sense of humor
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they have outdone themselves in recent years.
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Specifically, they have used an unusual HyperWave `Caster
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Specifically, they have used an unusual HyperWave 'Caster
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to impersonate the Ilwrath gods Dogar and Kazon.
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When the Ilwrath began tuning-in to `the voices of their gods' on their HyperWave receivers
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their priest caste was understandably skeptical
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@@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ Kohr-Ah proposed a simpler alternative, the `Eternal Doctrine.'
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Simply put, this scheme called for the systematic eradication of all sentient life in the universe
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aside from the Ur-Quan.
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Captain, if these positions seem to you extreme or unwarranted
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you must remember that the Ur-Quan had been unwilling slaves for millenia
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you must remember that the Ur-Quan had been unwilling slaves for millennia
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and that each of them had to remain in agony for years in order to defeat the Dnyarri.
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The followers of Kzer-Za and Kohr-Ah were all on the brink of madness
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but neither side would submit, and so they fought a bloody civil war.
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@@ -1130,7 +1130,7 @@ modifications to your planet landers which will double their speed.
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#(NEW_TECH_3) melnorme-133.ogg
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The technology we are now offering includes details on how to add
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'point-defense' laser defense systems for your flagship.
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`point-defense' laser defense systems for your flagship.
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#(NEW_TECH_4) melnorme-134.ogg
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The technology we are now offering includes plans for building
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@@ -1167,7 +1167,7 @@ modifications to your planet landers which make them resistant to planetary hot-
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#(NEW_TECH_12) melnorme-142.ogg
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The technology we are now offering is plans for building
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'Hellbore Cannons', a weapon much more destructive than a simple blaster.
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`Hellbore Cannons', a weapon much more destructive than a simple blaster.
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#(NEW_TECH_13) melnorme-143.ogg
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The technology we are now offering includes details on how to develop
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@@ -1243,7 +1243,7 @@ I am certain you will appreciate this new module, Captain!
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With it you should be able to destroy and devastate twice as fast as before.
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#(CHARITY) melnorme-157.ogg
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Since you have no useful, easily removeable equipment on your vessel
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Since you have no useful, easily removable equipment on your vessel
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we have decided to provide you with fuel at no cost.
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Please do not make the mistake of thinking of this as a `gift' or act of altruism
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we are merely investing in our relationship with you, the customer.
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