Spelling and punctuation pass (bug #1200)

2015-01-08 22:44:04 -08:00
parent 14c03b08f6
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27 changed files with 66 additions and 63 deletions
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ I'll be. It's the Arilou. Why the hell did you run out on the Alliance of Free S
 You're annoyed. How interesting.
 It has been so long since I dealt with Humans. I had forgotten what it was like.
 Now let's see, how shall I best appease you? Yes, if I remember, an honest answer would help.
-We didn't exactly 'run out' on the Alliance.
+We didn't exactly `run out' on the Alliance.
 We chose to leave when there was no longer a reason to stay.
 You humans seemed safe enough under the Ur-Quan slave shield.
 In fact, we rather liked the idea and wished we had thought of it ourselves.
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Our origins and purposes are, frankly, mysterious and due to several unavoidable
 we are unable to discuss ourselves in any great detail.

 #(what_factors)
-What are these 'unavoidable factors'?
+What are these `unavoidable factors'?

 #(FACTORS_ARE)	melnorme-006.ogg
 First and foremost among these factors
@@ -670,7 +670,7 @@ Although it is probably too early to tell, it would appear that the Kohr-Ah are
 No doubt you are familiar with an alien race called the Umgah who live in the Orionis constellation.
 While they are renowned for their potent and often cruel sense of humor
 they have outdone themselves in recent years.
-Specifically, they have used an unusual HyperWave `Caster
+Specifically, they have used an unusual HyperWave 'Caster
 to impersonate the Ilwrath gods Dogar and Kazon.
 When the Ilwrath began tuning-in to `the voices of their gods' on their HyperWave receivers
 their priest caste was understandably skeptical
@@ -1034,7 +1034,7 @@ Kohr-Ah proposed a simpler alternative, the `Eternal Doctrine.'
 Simply put, this scheme called for the systematic eradication of all sentient life in the universe
 aside from the Ur-Quan.
 Captain, if these positions seem to you extreme or unwarranted
-you must remember that the Ur-Quan had been unwilling slaves for millenia
+you must remember that the Ur-Quan had been unwilling slaves for millennia
 and that each of them had to remain in agony for years in order to defeat the Dnyarri.
 The followers of Kzer-Za and Kohr-Ah were all on the brink of madness
 but neither side would submit, and so they fought a bloody civil war.
@@ -1114,7 +1114,7 @@ modifications to your planet landers which will double their speed.

 #(NEW_TECH_3)	melnorme-133.ogg
 The technology we are now offering includes details on how to add
-'point-defense' laser defense systems for your flagship.
+`point-defense' laser defense systems for your flagship.

 #(NEW_TECH_4)	melnorme-134.ogg
 The technology we are now offering includes plans for building
@@ -1151,7 +1151,7 @@ modifications to your planet landers which make them resistant to planetary hot-

 #(NEW_TECH_12)	melnorme-142.ogg
 The technology we are now offering is plans for building
-'Hellbore Cannons', a weapon much more destructive than a simple blaster.
+`Hellbore Cannons', a weapon much more destructive than a simple blaster.

 #(NEW_TECH_13)	melnorme-143.ogg
 The technology we are now offering includes details on how to develop
@@ -1227,7 +1227,7 @@ I am certain you will appreciate this new module, Captain!
 With it you should be able to destroy and devastate twice as fast as before.

 #(CHARITY)	melnorme-157.ogg
-Since you have no useful, easily removeable equipment on your vessel
+Since you have no useful, easily removable equipment on your vessel
 we have decided to provide you with fuel at no cost.
 Please do not make the mistake of thinking of this as a `gift' or act of altruism
 we are merely investing in our relationship with you, the customer.
@@ -816,7 +816,7 @@ All six of them have exceptionally high esper ratings.
 In the two weeks that have passed since the Chmmr began to work on your vessel
 they attached the Utwig bomb to your ship, and have also put in place
 their own crystalline amplification devices to boost dramatically the power of the weapon.
-This work is now complete, and your flagship is ready for what ever final modifications you desire.
+This work is now complete, and your flagship is ready for whatever final modifications you desire.
 The Chmmr technicians wanted me to explain to you that the bomb and its crystal power boosters
 are fragile and cannot be moved from their positions at the back of your vehicle.
 Now I have some bad news, and some good news.
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@ on its true function and power.
 #(ABOUT_UCASTER) starbase-141.ogg
 SUBJECT: HyperWave Broadcaster - Umgah Design.
 DATA: This unit is capable of generating extremely intense HyperWave transmissions
-though it is otherwise similar to our own `Casters.
+though it is otherwise similar to our own 'Casters.
 SUMMARY: This thing would be great for practical jokes. You could scream `Boo!' from an Oort Cloud
 and scare the pants, or whatever, off everyone in the system.
 If you used it in HyperSpace, there's no telling who might hear you and come running.
@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ will permit them to mutually annihilate each other.
 It seems that you are making good use of the Ultron. Is this so?

 #(ULTRON_IS_GREAT)	utwig-058.ogg
-You ask a question that I hesistate to answer. You see, normally at this point
+You ask a question that I hesitate to answer. You see, normally at this point
 I would don the mask of Rampant Jubilation and Jumping With Ecstatic Glee.
 This mask is seldom worn, for few events merit its complexity.
 Since I do not currently possess this mask