Dialog fixes.

git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/sc2/code/trunk@1731 8092fc87-c524-0410-9efc-e669fe64eaf9
2005-05-10 16:09:17 +00:00
parent 18a863a0fb
commit 256783bf76
8 changed files with 254 additions and 257 deletions
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 #(OK_YOUBOO) 3635,2935,5678
 #(OK_DILRAT) 
 #(BIG_FUN) 1842,4417,7030,10955,7511,9444,9483
-#(FAST_AS_CAN) 4797,9474,8122,7060,901,1452,1132,7571,5998,4156,5088,1291,1513
+#(FAST_AS_CAN) 4780,9416,8007,7329,2639,8578,5938,3949,5188
 #(GLORIOUS_WORSHIP) 8892,7902
 #(ON_WAY) 10225,5738,5568,12929,9514
 #(GODS_RETURN_1) 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@
 #(NO_PEACE) 7611
 #(NO_ALLIANCE) 9053,8342
 #(ILWRATH_BELIEVE) 1632,6730
-#(OK_KILL_THRADDASH) 1982,2032,7452,4637,4676,6660,3705,4927,1933,6259,1352,4577
+#(OK_KILL_THRADDASH) 2108,2120,7489,4467,4648,7019,3269,5098,7867,6189
 #(GOODBYE_GODS) 8141
 #(INIT_HELLO_SPACE) 7020,3675,4547
 #(SUBSEQUENT_HELLO_SPACE_1) 8983,8252,8542
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_1) 6189
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_2) 7771,4827,6870,4967,3285
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_3) 4857,4867,9324,6439,8162
-#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_4) 6299,6279,6469,5508,6800,6319,9223,4126,3515,9474,1833,10094,5668,13129,9033
+#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_4) 6388,6219,5318,6798,6739,6348,9306,4008,3491,11355,10167,5530,13036,8938
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_5) 9353,7581,6309
 #(STRENGTH_NOT_ALL) 7871,7891,3545,6290,5547
 #(NO_SLAY_BY_THOUSANDS) 4707,5318,5447,5128,7671
@@ -54,13 +54,13 @@
 #(LONG_AGO) 9193,3646,7671,7090
 #(KILLED_GOOD_GODS) 5438,4607,2914,5157,7551,6930,3735,6320,5998,3215,4456
 #(CHANNEL_44) 6499,4968,5447,5959,5318,6579
-#(BECAUSE_44) 2093,3635,6350,5808,6509,6480
+#(BECAUSE_44) 2115,4689,5277,5268,6818,8137
-#(WHAT_ABOUT_ILWRATH) 4987,3965,4767
+#(WHAT_ABOUT_ILWRATH) 5065,5628,4188
-#(ABOUT_PHYSIO) 6189,6700,6189,6710,8091,5568,8062,6900
+#(ABOUT_PHYSIO) 8624,4090,9448,9717,5927,9657,7157
-#(ABOUT_HISTORY) 4086,7511,7480,5478,9414,5928,8382,7161,4867,7410,7541,7931,7902,5257,6930,6099,4416,3085
+#(ABOUT_HISTORY) 3884,7819,7478,5479,9435,5819,8358,7038,4838,7688,7418,7896,8009,4958,8188,5039,4467,2790
 #(ABOUT_CULTURE) 5167,6189,6640,7731,10896,5317
 #(ABOUT_URQUAN) 6810,7801,9704,9183,5448,7741
-#(URQUAN_TOO_NICE) 7871,9414,5768,9804,9954,7061
+#(URQUAN_TOO_NICE) 7955,9617,5558,9748,10037,7038
 #(OF_COURSE_WERE_EVIL) 5849,8091,6580,9634
 #(DONT_CONFUSE_US) 4566,9153,7962,2774,4086,3194,5548,4377,1231,3796
 #(ON_WAY_TO_THRADDASH) 2614,3575,4446,5677
@@ -34,15 +34,11 @@ Evil Dogar, Cruel Kazon! How Can We Be So Fortunate To Hear From You Again?
 We Pray Thee Gods, Forgive Us For Not Yet Beginning The Slaying Of The Thraddash.
 Quickly Now, I Must Rend Three Limbs From My Thorax As A Sign Of My Supplication.
 AIEE!
 AIEE!
 AIEE!
 It Is Done! Dogar And Kazon See My Fluids And Must Smile. I Am Happy!
 We Make All Haste, But Are Limited By The Speed Of Our Avenger Starcraft.
 We Know Our Pitiful Excuses Are Worthless...
 We Must Show Our Shame With The Removal Of Yet More Limbs.
-AIEE
+AIEE!
 AIEE
 AIEE
 #(GLORIOUS_WORSHIP) ilwra007.ogg
 Attend! The Cruel Twins Of Pain And Death Have Returned To Instruct Us!
@@ -72,7 +68,7 @@ Thus Was Our Gods' Arrival Foretold!
 #(JUST_GRUNTS) ilwra012.ogg
 What Is That? The Voices Of Our Gods Dogar And Kazon? Surely It Cannot Be!
-And Yet My Set Is Tuned To The Mystic 44 -- Who Else Can It Be?
+And Yet My Set Is Tuned To The Mystic 44 -- Who Else Could It Be?
 I Am Unworthy Of Such Attention As This!
 Dogar -- Kazon! Your Divine Words Will Surely Consume Me.
 I Beeseech Thee! Speak Directly To The Leaders At Homeworld!
@@ -101,7 +97,7 @@ For This We Thank You!
 We Shall Make Instant Obeisance, Divine Lords Of Darkness!
 Acolyte! Light The Candles Of Torment -- Quickly!
 No You Idiot! Not The White Ones...
-Use The Yellow And Red Ones We Made From The Prisoners Last Week, The Ones With The Lumps.
+Use The Yellow And Red Ones We Made From The Prisoners Last Week, The Ones With The Lumps. Yes, Yes!
 No Fool, Not Those! They Are Still Wet!
 #(WE_WORSHIP_3) ilwra017.ogg
@@ -112,7 +108,7 @@ This We Shall Do In Your Names!
 We Shall Bring Forth The Last Remaining Hu-Man Prisoner
 And Pull Its Head Apart Slowly, So That Its Cries Last For Hours.
 This We Shall Do In Your Names!
-We Shall Torment, Terrorize, Maim And Kill, Again, Again And AGAIN!
+We Shall Torment, Terrorize, Maim And Kill, Again, And Again, And AGAIN!
 This We Shall Do In Your Names!
 #(SUBSEQUENT_CHMMR_HELLO) ilwra018.ogg
@@ -163,7 +159,7 @@ And Now, YOU DIE!
 #(WHO_BLASTS_WHO) ilwra024.ogg
 I Have No Fear Of You, Feeble Mammal.
-Though My Ship Lacks A Functional Cloaking Device, And Many Of Our Crew Are Dead,
+Though My Ship Lacks A Functioning Cloaking Device, And Many Of Our Crew Are Dead,
 My Gods, Dogar The Black And Kazon The Unseen, Have Personally Confided To Me
 That They Despise You Hu-Mans, And That They Will Help Us To Kill You All!
@@ -188,7 +184,7 @@ Today, Hu-Man, Is Your Lucky Day!
 #(GENERAL_INFO) ilwra028.ogg
 Though Such Information Is Normally Holy And Secret,
-I Find I Am Unable To Contain Myself. Know This Fact, Hu-Man
+I Find I Am Unable To Contain Myself. Know This Fact
 You Are Hu-Man, Weak And Alone In This Universe With No Gods To Protect You.
 I Know This, Because The Only True Gods Are Our Own Ilwrath Deities, Dogar And Kazon!
 Dogar Is The Killer In A Black Cloak...
@@ -234,11 +230,10 @@ The Pkunk Are Unfit For OUR Sacramental Tortures!
 We Relish The Prospect Of Killing Worthy Prey!
 We Will Leave Immediately So That We Can Begin Our Glorious, Evil Devotions...
 But Who Shall We Prey Upon Next?
-Who Will Suffer Our Inspired Torment?
+Who Shall Suffer Our Inspired Torment?
-Hmm
+Hmm.
 Didn't Those Loathsome Umgah Once Mention A Race Near Their Region Of Space?
-Hmm
+Hmm... YES! I Have It! The THRADDASH!
 YES! I Have It! The THRADDASH!
 We Will Go NOW, And Kill All Of Them!
 #(GOODBYE_GODS) ilwra035.ogg
@@ -252,7 +247,7 @@ The Hu-Man Dies With Such Agony That It Cannot Help But Please
 Dogar And Kazon.
 #(SUBSEQUENT_HELLO_SPACE_1) ilwra037.ogg
-What Is It? Mmmm, Hu-Man! It Has Been Long Since I Have Seen A Hu-Man Die! 
+What Is It? Mmmm, Hu-Man! It Has Been So Long Since I Have Seen A Hu-Man Die!
 We Will Bet On How Many Parts We Can Remove Before It Stops Making Noise!
 Now, You Space-Ship Captain, Begin The Expedient Transfer Of All Hu-Man Crew
 So That We May Waste No Time.
@@ -269,7 +264,7 @@ Rejoice! The Duo Of Deception Shall Receive Their Supplication.
 #(SUBSEQUENT_HELLO_SPACE_3) ilwra039.ogg
 Your Fortuitous Arrival Bodes Well For Our Ceremony Of Consumption!
 The Hu-Man Must Prepare: It Must Perform A Complete Depilation,
-And Then Anoint Its Surface With The Larval Paste Of Our Stillborn Offspring.
+Then Anoint Its Surface With The Larval Paste Of Our Stillborn Offspring.
 At The Altar Of The Duo Of Darkness We Suck The Bony Strength From The Fleshy Weakness
 While The Hu-Man Squeals For Either Dogar Or Kazon!
 Hu-Man, Listen Closely To These Words
@@ -309,17 +304,16 @@ Else, You Will Bless The Altar Of Consumption With Your Ceremonial Blood!
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_4) ilwra044.ogg
 In The Brief Golden Moment - During The War With Your Alliance -
 We Ilwrath Enjoyed Unequaled Merriment And Festivities.
-So Much Blood And Lymph Fluid -- Ecstasy!
+So Much Blood And Lymph Fluid!
 Then, After The Ur-Quan Made Your Kind Fallow Slaves,
 We Were Forced To Use Species Indigenous To Our Planet For Amusement.
 We Lived A Pleasant Existence Until A Scandal Rocked The Ilwrath!
 The Grah -- Our Favorite Species To Torment, Which We Carefully Maintained At The Brink Of Extinction,
 Had Been Completely Consumed!
 A Bureaucratic Error Was To Blame.
-Quality Death Became Rare. Our Highly Advanced Civilization Began To Show Signs Of
+Quality Death Became Rare. Our Highly Advanced Civilization Began To Show Signs Of Degeneracy.
 Degeneracy.
 In Our Moment Of Need, We Prayed To The Mighty Duo For Direction,  And They Answered.
-`Go Forth', They Said. `Seek The Bird Beings.
+`Go Forth. Seek The Bird Beings.
 Pluck Them Slowly. Eviscerate Their Gasping Husks. Let Dogar And Kazon Drink Their Death And Pain!'
 We Went Forth And We Found The Pkunk, But Hu-Man, Now We Are Supremely Joyful...
 Because You Die So Much Better!
@@ -331,7 +325,7 @@ And Spit Your Thin Soul Onto The Ninth Mountain Of Hell.
 Therefore We Shall Simply Cut You Up And Feed You To The Pets.
 #(STRENGTH_NOT_ALL) ilwra046.ogg
-Ha Foolish Flesh Sac, Your Obsession With Strength Spells Your Doom. 
+Ha! Foolish Flesh Sac, Your Obsession With Strength Spells Your Doom.
 Only Through Enlightenment Achieved With Diligent Ritual Worship Of The Twins Of Darkness
 Can A Being Truly Be Victorious!
 Death, No Matter What The Source, Feeds The Wicked Pair.
@@ -384,7 +378,7 @@ From That Moment On, The Directives And Philosophies Of Dogar And Kazon
 Are Manifested By The Hatchling.
 #(KILLED_GOOD_GODS) ilwra054.ogg
-During The Dark Ages, Yes, We Were Confused By The Many Gods.
+During The Dark Ages, We Were Confused By The Many Gods.
 There Were Dozens Of Deities Ranging From Zith Of The Pelt
 To Awk Of The Seds.
 It Was Only Through The Careful Formation Of A Priestly Ruling Body
@@ -393,13 +387,13 @@ This New Priestly Cabal Revealed That We Must Discard All Other Gods
 Be They Of Hearth Or Flowing Web.
 Only The Priests Were Capable Of Interpreting The Will Of The Gods.
 Their Order Refined Our Worship Until We Could Do No Better.
-Specifically, All Heretics Were To Be Eaten,
+All Heretics Were To Be Eaten,
 And All Possessions Were To Be Delivered To The Holy Sites
 Or The Priestly Dwellings.
 #(CHANNEL_44) ilwra055.ogg
 The Deific Duo Broadcast On Channel 44. Their Words Of Wisdom Are
-Available To All And The Instructions Are Carried Out To The Best Of Our
+Available To All And Their Instructions Are Carried Out To The Best Of Our
 Mortal Ability. We Know That We Are Pleasing The Gods Because They
 No Longer Find It Necessary To Guide Us. In The Past, The Dark Twins
 Were Compelled To Direct Us Almost Daily, But Now Have Received No
@@ -408,28 +402,27 @@ Channel Should Dogar And Kazon Choose To Be Heard.
 #(BECAUSE_44) ilwra056.ogg
 They Do It For Us.
-First, They Clear The Channel Of Messy Static And
+First, They Clear The Channel Of Messy Static And Interference.
-Interference. Second, It Made It Easy For Us To Properly Identify What
+Second, It Made It Easy For Us To Properly Identify
-Might Be Mistaken For Mad Rambling As The Sacred Words. You See,
+What Might Be Mistaken For Mad Rambling As The Sacred Words.
-Dogar Possesses 44 Eyes That See Into The 44 Planes Of Existence And
+You See, Dogar Possesses 44 Eyes That See Into The 44 Planes Of Existence
-Each Of Kazon's 44 Sub-Tongues Is Made Up Of 44 Plump, Writhing
+And Each Of Kazon's 44 Sub-Tongues Is Made Up Of 44 Plump, Writhing Cilia.
-Cilia. Besides, They Knew We Were 'Captain Satellite' Viewers.
+Besides, They Knew We Were 'Captain Satellite' Viewers.
 #(WHAT_ABOUT_ILWRATH) ilwra057.ogg
-Yes, Your Interest Is Not Unusual. It Is Through The Omniscient Guidance
+Your Interest Is Not Unusual. It Is Through The Omniscient Guidance
-Of Our Mighty Lords Of Darkness That We Have Achieved This State Of
+Of Our Mighty Lords Of Darkness That We Have Achieved This State Of Near Perfection.
-Near Perfection. We Will Dispel Your Ignorance Concerning The First
+We Will Dispel Your Ignorance Concerning The First Child Species
-Child Species Of The Unmerciful Dogar And Kazon.
+Of The Unmerciful Dogar And Kazon.
 #(ABOUT_PHYSIO) ilwra058.ogg
-Yes, Our Striking Appearance Only Hints At The True Strength That
+Yes, Our Striking Appearance Only Hints At The True Strength That Resides Inside.
-Resides Inside. Coursing Through Our Thorax Are The Fluids Of Life. 
+Coursing Through Our Thorax Are The Fluids Of Life.
-Like Yourselves, If We Leak In Excess, We Will Satiate The Sacrificial
+Like Yourselves, If We Leak In Excess, We Will Satiate The Sacrificial Needs Of Dogar And Kazon.
-Needs Of Dogar And Kazon. Our Mandibles Allow Us To Communicate,
+Our Mandibles Allow Us To Communicate, Take Sustenance, And Deliver Pain.
-Take Sustenance, And Deliver Pain. The Appendages You See Here
+The Appendages You See Here Allow Us To Manipulate Our Technologies
-Allow Us To Manipulate Our Technologies And Will Regenerate When
+And Will Regenerate When Damaged Or Lost As Often Happens In Many Of The Rituals Of Pain.
-Damaged Or Lost As Often Happens In Many Of The Rituals Of Pain. Our
+Our Sensory Cluster Lets Us Monitor The Whim And Will Of The Deadly Duo
 Sensory Cluster Lets Us Monitor The Whim And Will Of The Deadly Duo
 In The Complex Sequence Of Events That Leads Us All To Death.
 #(ABOUT_HISTORY) ilwra059.ogg
@@ -447,8 +440,8 @@ We Honored The Wishes Of The Soft And Merciful Ur-Quan And Stopped Eating You Hu
 To Continue Our Festive Ceremonies Of Death We Began Employing Our Native Species For Ceremony.
 Things Seemed To Be Going Well Until We Accidentally Exhausted Our Supply Of All These Life Forms.
 We Became Distraught And Called To Our Gods For Guidance!
-Then, Eight Years Ago, Dogar And Kazon Responded To Our Wails Of
+Then, Eight Years Ago, Dogar And Kazon Responded To Our Wails Of Dismay
-Dismay By Directing Us To Devour Feathered Bird Beings-The Pkunk!
+By Directing Us To Devour Feathered Bird Beings-The Pkunk!
 We Now Penetrate Deeply Into Their Home Space!
 When We Complete Our Mission Of Genocide
 We Are Certain That We Will Once Again Hear From Dogar And Kazon.
@@ -465,11 +458,11 @@ How Can They Help But Notice The Scream Caused By The Mangled Nervous Tissue?
 #(ABOUT_URQUAN) ilwra061.ogg
 The Ur-Quan Are But The Instruments Of Dogar And Kazon, Even Though They May Not Admit To It.
 This Is Because It Was The Evil Twins That Had Them Assist Us With Their Technologies And Resources.
-Their Soft Merciful Nature Sickens Both Gods But They See The Potential That The Ur-Quan Possess.
+Their Soft, Merciful Nature Sickens Both Gods But They See The Potential That The Ur-Quan Possess.
 If You Doubt This Statement, Notice That The Ur-Quan Dreadnought Is Staffed With 42 Crew Members.
 Since Dogar And Kazon Exhibit The Quality Of Omnipresence
 The Total Crew Complement Is Actually At The Auspicious Count Of 44!
-That The Ur-Quan Are But Instruments Of The Dark Twins Of Death Is A Foregone Conclusion.
+That The Ur-Quan Are But Instruments Of The Dark Twins Is A Foregone Conclusion.
 #(URQUAN_TOO_NICE) ilwra062.ogg
 Simply Put, The Ur-Quan Are Far Too Kind To Please Dogar And Kazon.
@@ -496,9 +489,8 @@ Evil Is Doing Things That Make Others Hurt Or Fear.
 We ALL Do That, Of Course.
 But Since We ALL Do Such Things, As Sanctioned By Our Culture,
 It Would Be `Bad' To Do Otherwise.
-Which Means...
+Which Means...  Er...  Er...
-Er... 
+Blasphemer! Do Not Play With Words! You Anger Both Dogar And Kazon! Now You Must Die!
 Puny Hu-Man, Do Not Play With Words! You Anger Both Dogar And Kazon! Now You Must Die!
 #(ON_WAY_TO_THRADDASH) ilwra065.ogg
 Begone Hu-Mans!
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 #(TELL_US_ABOUT_WORLD) 3295,8182,4626
 #(BYE_AND_DIE_HOMEWORLD) 4827,3935
-#(RAMBLE_1) 8652
+#(RAMBLE_1) 9152,9489
 #(RAMBLE_2) 4516
 #(RAMBLE_3) 6379
 #(RAMBLE_4) 5778
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@
 #(clue_3) 
 #(what_about_shattered) 
 #(ABOUT_SHATTERED) 
-#(HELLO_SUN_DEVICE_WORLD_1) 2223,2384,4246
+#(HELLO_SUN_DEVICE_WORLD_1) 2500,2500,2500,2500
 #(HELLO_SUN_DEVICE_WORLD_2) 2774,2814
 #(whats_up_sun_device) 
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SUN_DEVICE) 6119,6369,6109,5929,4706,4888
@@ -106,4 +106,4 @@
 #(AMBUSH_TAIL) 
 #(RAMBLE_TAIL) 
 #(WE_GO_TO_IMPLANT) 6089,4106,4667,2623,5388,4857,2854,6059
-#(WONT_FALL_FOR_TRICK) 2500
+#(WONT_FALL_FOR_TRICK) 2500,2500
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 #(TELL_US_ABOUT_WORLD)	mycon000.ogg
 Your suggestion is appropriate.
 Acceptable new worlds are a priority for the rapid and complete spread of Juffo-Wup.
-We wish to know more for suitability assessment.
+We wish to know more for our suitability assessment.
 Tell us of this world.
 #(BYE_AND_DIE_HOMEWORLD)	mycon001.ogg
@@ -10,15 +10,16 @@ We will now remove this clog.
 We will now aid Juffo-Wup by eliminating you!
 #(RAMBLE_1)	mycon002.ogg
-A single spore lands, finds nourishment in decay and attains maturity..
+A single spore lands, finds nourishment in decay and soon attains maturity..
-In turn it exhales a cloud of life, a thousand spores land... so progresses Juffo-Wup.
+In turn it exhales a cloud of new life, a thousand spores, each lands, finds nourishment in decay
 so progresses Juffo-Wup.
 #(RAMBLE_2)	mycon003.ogg
 Our bodies seethe with the passion of our genes.
 A thousand of your species do not possess the richness in one of my cells.
 #(RAMBLE_3)	mycon004.ogg
-I fill with my parents parents parents parents parents parents parents
+I fill with my parents parents parents parents parents
 I am they -- they are us. Then, and now.
 #(RAMBLE_4)	mycon005.ogg
@@ -108,7 +109,7 @@ to learn the weakness that will allow us to Void the Non.
 #(RAMBLE_23)	mycon024.ogg
 At times, I meet another, who shares with me the life of parent inside the mind
-and if we speak this fragment is predominant in the both of us
+and if we speak this fragment becomes predominant in the both of us
 self meets self with occasionally enlightening results.
 #(RAMBLE_24)	mycon025.ogg
@@ -125,7 +126,7 @@ The tough casing warms as it passes through the atmosphere, glowing white as it
 solid rock flows like liquid, and the child slips into the warm, safe depths beneath the crust.
 #(RAMBLE_26)	mycon027.ogg
-`...look... think... act... look... learn... remember... teach...look... think...'
+`...look... think... act... look... learn... remember... teach... repeat...'
 #(RAMBLE_27)	mycon028.ogg
 The implantation fleet has assembled in orbit above the green world
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ I do not know how.
 #(RAMBLE_29)	mycon030.ogg
 When Juffo-Wup is complete
-when at last there is no Void or Non
+when at last there is no Void, no Non
 when the Creators return
 then we can finally rest.
@@ -150,7 +151,7 @@ Darkness is Void
 Juffo-Wup is light.
 #(RAMBLE_31)	mycon032.ogg
-`... planetary transformer biot 94-18: take your place at the dais...'
+`... planetary transformer biot 94-18: take your place at the transporter dais...'
 #(RAMBLE_32)	mycon033.ogg
 You are the Non. You must go now, and never return.
@@ -241,7 +242,7 @@ Mycon. Please try to understand. We wish peace between our peoples.
 #(HELLO_HOMEWORLD_1)	mycon035.ogg
 Juffo-Wup is All... omni-existent, spreading and changing the Non into Juffo-Wup.
-You are the Non, who must become Juffo-Wup or Void.
+You are Non, who must become Juffo-Wup or Void.
 We are the agents of Juffo-Wup.
 We are the Mycon.
@@ -383,11 +384,11 @@ However, Juffo-Wup is inevitable.  The Deep Children WILL be born.
 #(DIE_THIEF)	mycon062.ogg
 You have taken something from us which we value... which is important to Juffo-Wup.
-Return the Solar Manipulator.
+Return the Solar Manipulator immediately.
 #(DIE_THIEF_AGAIN)	mycon063.ogg
 You have taken something from us which we value... which is important to Juffo-Wup.
-Return the Solar Manipulator.
+Return the Solar Manipulator immediately.
 #(GOODBYE_AND_DIE)	mycon064.ogg
 Juffo-Wup is All
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-#(GIVE_SPINDLE) 4156,3675,3075,5087,7250,4016,4857,3726,7991,1953
+#(GIVE_SPINDLE) 4413,3858,3290,4979,2738,3220,2478,2870,4869,3687,7938,2129
 #(name_1) 
 #(name_2) 
 #(name_3) 
@@ -6,22 +6,22 @@
 #(name_41) 
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_1) 5758,5548,6049
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_3) 4877,5819,5778,7881
-#(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_2) 3956,5027,5187,3836,1272,3925
+#(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_2) 4349,5220,5058,4989,4029
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_4) 2654,5558,1992,4727,2854,5779,2844
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_1) 4427,6359,4426,5538
-#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_2) 5518,5157,6269,4086
+#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_2) 5846,6226,3379,5300
-#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_3) 4626,3816,4997,4116
+#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_3) 3888,2950,3988,3109
-#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_4) 4717,4837,5277,3936,5889
+#(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_4) 4322,5898,4250,6118,6327
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_5) 5107,5058,6379,7130,3255,5416,4608,4917
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_6) 4116,6609,4156,2494,3214
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_7) 6279
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_8) 6149
 #(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_1) 4536,5278,2393,1923,3135
-#(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2) 6550,4867
+#(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2) 5796,5067,5219
 #(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_3) 6239
 #(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_4) 6199
-#(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_1) 5158,4426,4757,4386
+#(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_1) 3560,4008,4538,7039
-#(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2) 6208,4567
+#(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2) 6425,3491
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_3) 6189
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_4) 6179
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_5) 6399
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
 #(NO_GO_HOME_1) 9104
 #(bad_reason_2) 
 #(NO_GO_HOME_2) 4035,7631
-#(SENSE_KOHRAH_VICTORY) 5298,4657,4556,3345,4326,7241,5127,3415,9423,7651,7061,5337
+#(SENSE_KOHRAH_VICTORY) 3358,4350,3417,4969,3208,6999,6878,4089,6609,4157,10899,7976
 #(SPIRITUAL_PROBLEMS_1) 6369,5798,6109,1653,3915,3565
 #(SPIRITUAL_PROBLEMS_2) 2614,6419,4296,6059,4086
 #(SPIRITUAL_PROBLEMS_3) 2333,2935,2303,3285,5037,3725
@@ -66,19 +66,17 @@
 #(ABOUT_US_ANGRY) 5418,8252,4046
 #(what_about_you) 
 #(should_be_friends) 
-#(YES_FRIENDS) 6639,4827,4907
+#(YES_FRIENDS) 5275,5190,4627
 #(try_to_be_nicer) 
-#(CANT_ASK_FOR_MORE) 7020,5097,5088,4616
+#(CANT_ASK_FOR_MORE) 7426,1819,6968,6878
 #(VISIT_OUR_HOMEWORLD) 5518
-#(CAN_BE_FRIENDS) 5958,5718,10315
+#(CAN_BE_FRIENDS) 5034,4039,12347
 #(bye_angry) 
-#(GOODBYE_ANGRY) 
+#(GOODBYE_ANGRY) 2276
 #(we_conquer) 
 #(WHY_CONQUER) 3004
 #(conquer_because_1) 
-#(NOT_CONQUER_10) 
+#(NOT_CONQUER_1) 2186,3019
 #(NOT_CONQUER_11) 
 #(NOT_CONQUER_12) 
 #(conquer_because_2) 
 #(NOT_CONQUER_2) 2163
 #(must_conquer) 
@@ -92,11 +90,11 @@
 #(we_here_to_help) 
 #(NEED_HELP) 3675,4226,6810,3124,6760,8222,4166
 #(we_need_help) 
-#(GIVE_HELP) 6118,5018,5117
+#(GIVE_HELP) 6512,4949,5227,7607
 #(exploring_universe) 
 #(SENSE_DEEPER_CONFLICT) 4607,5738,3825,5428
 #(fun_cruise) 
-#(REPRESS) 5508,8843
+#(REPRESS) 5895,5268,3799,4788
 #(why_ilwrath_fight) 
 #(ILWRATH_FIGHT_BECAUSE) 5508,2403,5979,2262,6120,7390,5048,2303,4927,3285,4066,3555
 #(when_fight_start) 
@@ -104,7 +102,7 @@
 #(how_goes_fight) 
 #(FIGHT_GOES) 4236,4887,5968,2424
 #(how_goes_war) 
-#(WAR_GOES_1) 5378,4256,4827,4676,3926,4006,4206,4917,4146,3205,2934
+#(WAR_GOES_1) 5969,5447,4909,4358,4679,2329,4549,4547,4151,3208,3100
 #(WAR_GOES_2) 4657,5958,4637,2834,5778,1473,5317,4767,3245
 #(WAR_GOES_3) 
 #(WAR_GOES_4) 3606,5337,3285,3115,5367
@@ -113,26 +111,26 @@
 #(enough_ilwrath) 
 #(OK_ENOUGH_ILWRATH) 3826,5137,7171,5357,2924
 #(what_about_history) 
-#(ABOUT_HISTORY) 4356,5188,7320,3155,6890,2003,2784,2643,1723,2694
+#(ABOUT_HISTORY) 4638,5418,7187,3500,6607,2190,2779,4309,2920
 #(what_about_yehat) 
 #(ABOUT_YEHAT) 3425,6129,5798,5037,4066,4276
 #(what_about_culture) 
-#(ABOUT_CULTURE) 4035,4628,1492,3455,2612,672
+#(ABOUT_CULTURE) 4389,4530,1488,3470,1799
 #(elaborate_culture) 
 #(OK_ELABORATE_CULTURE) 7501,1371,5288,4757,5638
 #(what_about_future) 
 #(ABOUT_FUTURE) 5207,3936,8372,4236,6750,3274,6480
 #(enough_about_you) 
 #(OK_ENOUGH_ABOUT_US) 7150
-#(ABOUT_US) 7200,4136
+#(ABOUT_US) 5100,3809
 #(where_fleet_1) 
 #(where_fleet_2) 
 #(where_fleet_3) 
 #(MIGRATING_HOMEWORLD_1) 6470
 #(MIGRATING_HOMEWORLD_2) 4817,6950
 #(MIGRATING_HOMEWORLD_3) 6409,5318
-#(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_1) 
+#(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_1) 5164
-#(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_2) 
+#(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_2) 2314
 #(am_worried_1) 
 #(am_worried_2) 
 #(am_worried_3) 
@@ -148,14 +146,14 @@
 #(obey) 
 #(NO_OBEY) 4847,4397,4716,6420
 #(neutral_bye_space) 
-#(NEUTRAL_GOODBYE_SPACE) 6389,5298
+#(NEUTRAL_GOODBYE_SPACE) 6735,4257
 #(SHIP_GIFT) 2253,1943,6229
 #(NO_ROOM) 5828
 #(friendly_bye_space) 
 #(FRIENDLY_GOODBYE_SPACE) 6439
 #(bye_friendly) 
 #(GOODBYE_FRIENDLY) 
-#(ALMOST_ALLIANCE) 2694,4927,6330,9002,9303,7391
+#(ALMOST_ALLIANCE) 3068,4980,2028,4438,9037,5720,3838,7109
 #(INIT_NO_ROOM) 6249,3655,6169
 #(INIT_SHIP_GIFT) 4156,7140
 #(suit_yourself) 
@@ -165,16 +163,16 @@
 #(whats_up_space) 
 #(SHIPS_AT_HOME) 3495,2864,5277,4747
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_1) 6299,6800,3815,5608,4156,3926,4346
-#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_2) 6739,5879,6439,4837,3815,7982
+#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_2) 7124,6009,6446,4740,4008,7908,5968
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_3) 6419,5128,4656,6109,6500
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_4) 4236,3465,5498,4847,5107,4607,8552,4477
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_5) 6900,9223,6750,7231,7771,2604,7620,2574,5178,5417
-#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_6) 4997,1392,891
+#(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_6) 5373,1371
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_7) 
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_8) 
 #(tell_my_fortune) 
 #(FORTUNE_IS_1) 3926,3995,5338,4076,8362,7441
-#(FORTUNE_IS_2) 5659,6809,6770,6399,2374,3825,2974,4227,4726
+#(FORTUNE_IS_2) 3033,3100,6789,6947,6267,2611,3799,3169,3829,5208
 #(FORTUNE_IS_3) 4978,5517,6670,5929,4586
 #(FORTUNE_IS_4) 5888,2864,6890,3665,5558,6099,4907,1963
 #(FORTUNE_IS_5) 6329,5347,7291,4807,4937,3014,7100,3916
@@ -3,8 +3,10 @@ WAIT!... a spirit voice rings within my soul
 it tells me that I must give you something
 something to aid you on your noble quest!
 What, spirit? What must we give this young human?
-Mineral resources?... no. Important secrets?... no. Starships?...
+Mineral resources?... no.
-no. Then what IS it spirit, spit it out!
+Important secrets?... no.
 Starships?...  no.
 Then what IS it spirit, spit it out!
 What?!... that thing? Are you sure? Okay.
 Here you go, Captain. Take this Clear Spindle.
 It is an ancient and powerful device built by the Precursors hundreds of thousands of years ago.
@@ -28,8 +30,8 @@ The Empire of
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_1)	pkunk001.ogg
 Welcome to our home stars. We are the Pkunk. Pkunk we are.
 Seekers of the deepest truths, askers of interesting and significant questions.
-Even now a question of great transcendental significance comes unbidden to our minds.
+Even now a question of great transcendental significance comes unbidden to our minds:
-Who are you and what do you want?'
+`Who are you and what do you want?'
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_3)	pkunk002.ogg
 Greetings and various apropos felicitations!  We are Pkunk.
@@ -39,11 +41,10 @@ purveyors of blissful love, birdlike manifestations of glorious light energies f
 How about yourselves?
 #(NEUTRAL_SPACE_HELLO_2)	pkunk003.ogg
-Do not be frightened.  We are powerful creatures, yes
+Do not be frightened.  We are powerful creatures, yes,
-but we could not hurt you anymore than we could squish the helpless Pootworm.
+but we could not hurt you any more than we could squish the helpless Pootworm.
 We love the Pootworm.  We are one with the Pootworm.  We are one with you.
-Of course you realize that this means you are one with the Pootworm.
+Of course you realize this means you are one with the Pootworm. Rejoice!!
 Rejoice!!
 To be one with the Pootworm is to be alive, and why not be alive?
 Is that not what living is for?
@@ -59,37 +60,37 @@ Go. Go now, young one. Go quickly!
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_1)	pkunk005.ogg
 Whoopdy Dee and Trolly Bazoo!  What a good day I am having.
-First, my nest mate surprises me with extra fat and spicy grubs for earlymeal
+First, my nest mate surprises me with extra fat and spicy grubs for earlymeal.
-and then I am complimented on my fine display of ceremonial tongs.
+Then I am complimented on my fine display of ceremonial tongs.
 To top it off, I encounter the human friend, loved by all Pkunk.
 Can things get any better?
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_2)	pkunk006.ogg
 The stars are in auspicious alignment, the various significant moons
-are in the correct houses, and ambient psychic energies are in
+are in the correct houses, and ambient psychic energies are in balance.
-balance. All is well, and the universe is at peace.  Well, actually 2/3
+All is well, and the universe is at peace.
-of our civilization has been decimated by the Ilwrath, but besides
+Well, actually 2/3 of our civilization has been decimated by the Ilwrath
-that, all is well.  It is good to see you again.
+but besides that, all is well.  It is good to see you again.
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_3)	pkunk007.ogg
-Human!  I was just thinking of you! Ah, but I see you are not
+Human!  I was just thinking of you!
-surprised, and why should you be? Amazing psychic occurences are
+Ah, but I see you are not surprised, and why should you be?
-commonplace for us Pkunk.  I am filled with love at the sight of you.
+Amazing psychic occurences are commonplace for us Pkunk.
-Perhaps we can converse together, or just coexist for a few special
+I am filled with love at the sight of you.
-moments.
+Perhaps we can converse together, or just coexist for a few special moments.
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_4)	pkunk008.ogg
-So fledgling, you have returned for your spiritual training. You seek
+So fledgling, you have returned for your spiritual training.
-to be as we Pkunk are.  An admirable if somewhat naive goal.
+You seek to be as we Pkunk are.  An admirable if somewhat naive goal.
-Of course, as a loving parent I must push you from the nest.  Try as
+Of course, as a loving parent I must push you from the nest.
-you might to cling to the side, I must step on your fingers and kick
+Try as you might to cling to the side, I must step on your fingers and kick you over the edge.
-you over the edge.  Ah but I cannot.  I see those sad Human eyes,
+Ah, but I cannot.  I see those sad Human eyes, and I must give in.
-and I must give in.  My love gushes forth.
+My love gushes forth.
 #(FRIENDLY_SPACE_HELLO_5)	pkunk009.ogg
 Ah, Captain human! I was hoping you would return. I have great news!
 Were you aware that in one of your previous lives, you were Duke Franz Ferdinand?
-It's true! And before that, you were the Egyptian god-pharoah Atum-ta, the sixth?
+It's true! And before that, you were the Egyptian god-pharoah Atum-ta, the sixth!
 This is amazing, Captain, just fantastic. Imagine, having been so many important people!
 Well, to be frank, your case is not all that unusual.
 It just so happens that almost everyone's past lives were as famous, rich or interesting people.
@@ -118,13 +119,14 @@ Auspicious portents and serendipitous omens have foretold your arrival.
 Welcome alien guest to the home of the gentle and playful Pkunk
 Children of the Cosmic Light
 Hobgoblins of Joy
-Seekers of Spiritual Truth...
+Seekers of Spiritual Truth
-... and other neat stuff like that.
+and other neat stuff like that.
 #(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2)	pkunk014.ogg
-Oh jubilation and moderate amounts of spiritual-type ecstasy, our sensitive
+Oh jubilation and moderate amounts of spiritual-type ecstasy!
-friend and intimate soulmate has returned to our homeworld, bringing with
+Our sensitive friend and intimate soulmate has returned to our homeworld,
-him his most beautiful aura and radiant smile. How do you fare, Captain?
+bringing with him his most beautiful aura and radiant smile.
 How do you fare, Captain?
 #(NEUTRAL_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_3)	pkunk015.ogg
 Hello human! We are warm and fuzzy with the news of your return.
@@ -135,16 +137,16 @@ Hello human! We are warm and fuzzy with the news of your return.
 What wisdom do you seek today?
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_1)	pkunk017.ogg
-Captain. We have been expecting you, of course. In fact, you are here because
+Captain. We have been expecting you, of course.
-we wished you to be here. By channeling our psychic energies through
+In fact, you are here because we wished you to be here.
-a transdimensional flux inducer, we are able to affect the low frequency
+By channeling our psychic energies through a transdimensional flux inducer
-stream of a soul particle such as yourself, and direct its course.
+we are able to affect the low frequency stream of a soul particle such as yourself, and direct its course.
 The only thing is, we can't remember why we brought you here.
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_2)	pkunk018.ogg
-Welcome back, Captain, to our humble planet. It is good, once again, to merge our
+Welcome back, Captain, to our humble planet.
-chakras with the totality of your spiritual essence. We speak, of course,
+It is good, once again, to merge our chakras with the totality of your spiritual essence.
-metaphorically. How can we best be of aid to you?
+We speak, of course, metaphorically. How can we best be of aid to you?
 #(FRIENDLY_HOMEWORLD_HELLO_3)	pkunk019.ogg
 Hello human! We are warm and fuzzy with the news of your return.
@@ -177,9 +179,9 @@ We are seekers of truth. Enlighten us!
 Since you are a perceptive individual, you have noticed that we are physiologically similar to the Yehat.
 This relationship is not coincidence, for indeed in the Harmonic Realm of Creation, there IS no coincidence.
 To be more specific, we are an off-shoot of the Yehat species
- -- a peaceful, empathic off-shoot! --
+ -- a peaceful, empathetic off-shoot! --
 which fractured from the Yehat race early in its Space Age.
-You see, we create Peace...Tranquility... and Harmony
+You see, we create Peace, Tranquility and Harmony
 whereas, the Yehat are birds of prey
 who live in a constant balance of terror with their fellow creatures.
@@ -196,7 +198,7 @@ Over many long years, we have investigated the mysteries of the Universe
 the powers of crystal energy
 regression into past lives
 the truth behind crop circles
-and in doing so we have been Transformed!
+and how to keep largely free of lice and other annoying parasites that tend to get into your feathers.
 #(GENERAL_INFO_NEUTRAL_4)	pkunk028.ogg
 You may wonder about our name... Pkunk.
@@ -236,26 +238,26 @@ We Pkunk, having risen to the ninty-ninth psychic plane, plus a tad
 are far beyond trapping our spiritual needs with crude matter.
 #(SENSE_KOHRAH_VICTORY)	pkunk033.ogg
-Before we proceed Captain, I must speak. Many of my people have not been
+Before we proceed Captain, I must speak.
-sleeping well these past few nights. In fact, I myself did not sleep well last
+Many of my people have not been sleeping well these past few nights.
-night. Well, actually I slept okay in the first part of the night, and then had
+In fact, I myself did not sleep well last night.
-a little trouble a little later on, maybe halfway through, until I got up and
+Well, actually I slept okay in the first part of the night, and then had a little trouble a little later on
-had something to eat. Anyway, the reason we're not sleeping is because of a
+maybe halfway through, until I got up and had something to eat.
-dream. Yes, a dream. We have seen that in the center of this region of space,
+Anyway, the reason we're not sleeping is because of a dream. Yes, a dream.
-near stars that form the shape of a cup, and are in a constellation that begins
+We have seen that in the center of this region of space, near stars that form the shape of a cup
-with the letter C and ends with the letter S, and whose letters rearranged
+and are in a constellation that begins with the letter C and ends with the letter S
-spell Asteric, two great armadas fight. One of black ships, the other of green.
+and whose letters rearranged spell `Asteric', two great armadas fight.
-Our dream tells us that if the black ships should win this fight, they will
+One of black ships, the other of green.
-destroy all life in this region. Captain, they are winning now. If there is
+Our dream tells us that if the black ships should win this fight, they will destroy all life in this region.
-anything you can do to stop them, you must do it... please! Okay, that's all I
+Captain, they are winning now. If there is anything you can do to stop them you must do it... please!
-wanted to say.
+Okay, that's all I wanted to say.
 #(SPIRITUAL_PROBLEMS_1)	pkunk034.ogg
 We welcome you to our space, perversely misguided spirits of hostile intent that you are.
 Perhaps it is simply that your species does not comprehend such subtle concepts
 as the unification of the inner self child with the universal love stream.
 So sad.
-Perhaps if we put it in terms you could understand
+Perhaps if we put it in terms you could understand:
 Killing bad, bad.
 Is that better?
@@ -302,7 +304,7 @@ I shall be in my chambers, recuperating.
 Yes. Yes. This is just as it was foretold.
 You will now open fire on our peaceful, and all but harmless ship
 missing us by 2.7 of your metric units.
-We will then regrettably but efficiently destroy you and continue on our way.
+We will then regrettably, but efficiently, destroy you and continue on our way.
 Ah, but perhaps you are alarmed by our prescience.
 Yes. Sometimes it amazes even us Pkunk.
@@ -355,7 +357,7 @@ I have no patience for this absurd idiocy. Prepare yourselves for battle!
 #(VERY_WELL)	pkunk050.ogg
 So, you choose the dark path.
 I am saddened, and yet I feel a certain exhilaration, for with your destruction
-the universe will be a better place, and it will be I who cause the change.
+the universe will be a better place, and it will be I who caused the change.
 #(why_insults)
 Just tell me one thing.  Why do you transmit insults during the course of a battle?
@@ -381,36 +383,37 @@ Suddenly I find myself very curious about your species.
 You are right. Perhaps we should be friends after all. Please forgive my past actions.
 #(YES_FRIENDS)	pkunk053.ogg
-Forgive? We Pkunk are hardly in a position to forgive. We ourselves are but
+Forgive? We Pkunk are hardly in a position to forgive.
-spiritual wayfarers on the road to perfection. Admittedly, we are approaching
+We ourselves are but spiritual wayfarers on the road to perfection.
-the end of the road, while you are still leaving the driveway -- but we are all
+Admittedly, we are approaching the end of the road, while you are still leaving the driveway
-travellers together.
+but we are all travellers together.
 #(try_to_be_nicer)
 Well, I feel pretty bad about killing you guys and stuff. I'll try not to blow up any more of your ships.
 #(CANT_ASK_FOR_MORE)	pkunk054.ogg
-That's all anyone can do... try. We absolve you of your past wrong-doings.
+That's all anyone can do... try. We absolve you of all your past wrong-doings.
-And please, do not thank us. We have taken pity on you and helped you to change
+And please, do not thank us.
-your inner self because we have chosen to heal ourselves and we are you and you
+We have taken pity on you and helped you to change your inner self because we have chosen to heal ourselves
-are us, therefore we help only those who heal themselves, and are thereby
+and we are you and you are us, therefore we help only those who heal themselves, and are thereby helping others.
-helping others. You see?
+You see?
 #(VISIT_OUR_HOMEWORLD)	pkunk055.ogg
 If you wish our assistance, you should consult with our wise ones
 at our homeworld. Its coordinates are 52.2, 52.5.
 #(CAN_BE_FRIENDS)	pkunk056.ogg
-Now that we've cleared the air and can completely trust each other, we'll just
+Now that we've cleared the air and can completely trust each other
-tell you where our home planet is located. It is the first planet in the Gamma
+we'll just tell you where our home planet is located.
-Krueger system, located at 52.2 : 52.5 on the standard HyperSpace starmap. Ah,
+It is the first planet in the Gamma Krueger system, located at 52.2, 52.5 on the standard HyperSpace starmap.
-now that feels so much better, doesn't it, friend?
+Ah, now that feels so much better, doesn't it, friend?
 #(bye_angry)
 Hello! Is anybody in there? You are a sentient species aren't you? Oh forget it. I'm leaving.
 #(GOODBYE_ANGRY)	pkunk057.ogg
-GOODBYE ANGRY
+Violent fool! Begone!
 My feathers are ruffled! Away!
 #(we_conquer)
 Avast! Delinquent Alien Birds. You are now being conquered. Submit!
@@ -420,14 +423,12 @@ Ah. Yes. Well. At least you are honest.
 Uh, excuse me if I may be so bold, but exactly why do you want to conquer us?
 #(conquer_because_1)
-I conquer for the greater glory of 
+I conquer for the greater glory of the human race!
-#(NOT_CONQUER_10)	pkunk059.ogg
+#(NOT_CONQUER_1)	pkunk059.ogg
-Did you say the 
+Did you say the humans?
-#(NOT_CONQUER_11)
+We Pkunk have long loved the humans!
-?  We Pkunk have long loved the 
+Why they're our favorite, uh... non-feathered friends!
 #(NOT_CONQUER_12)
 . It's our favorite alliance!
 #(conquer_because_2)
 It is regrettable, but your resources are needed to fight the war against the Ur-Quan
@@ -451,7 +452,7 @@ I turned to my first officer, Chrupp, and said
 `Chrupp, would you just look at that creature's aura! It's magnificent!'
 `the soft blues... the gentle greens... the unusual shades of chartreuse and ocher!'
 `This human must be on the side of Truth and Light, Chrupp, he must!'
-And then Chrupp said, `Just in case, I am raising shields and warming up the guns.'
+And then Chrupp said, `Just in case, I am raising the shields and warming up the guns.'
 I don't think Chrupp likes you, Captain.
 #(we_are_vindicator0)
@@ -488,16 +489,17 @@ I have come to ask you for your help in the fight against the Ur-Quan.
 The fight.  Always the fight.  We Pkunk are Yin and you are Yang.
 I suppose the problem is that the Ur-Quan are a little more Yang than you are.
 Well, be that as it may, we are sympathetic to your concerns.
-We were not always the mystical, aloof and yet caring, enlightened beings that we are now.
+We were not always the mystical, aloof -- and yet caring -- enlightened beings that we are now.
 If need be, we can still kick some serious butt!
 #(exploring_universe)
 We are on a five year mission, to seek out new life and new civilizations to boldly go where no.....well you get the idea.  We're kind of exploring.
 #(SENSE_DEEPER_CONFLICT)	pkunk066.ogg
 I sense a deeper reason, a deeper conflict.
-A conflict of immense proportion, a proportion of deeper reason.
+A conflict of immense proportion, a proportion of... deeper reason.
-A deeper thing that is not too terribly deep.
+A deeper thing that is... not too terribly deep.
-A conflicting deeper thing.......uh, I'm not really sure what I sense.
+A conflicting deeper thing... uh, I'm not really sure what I sense.
 Are you sure there isn't something you want to say to me?
 #(fun_cruise)
@@ -505,8 +507,10 @@ Oh ....uh, no reason.  We thought we'd just take this baby out for a little crui
 #(REPRESS)	pkunk067.ogg
 My telepathic sensors are telling me that you are repressing something.
-Repress, repress, repress.  What is is?  Come on.  What is it?  I see a smile.
+Repress, repress, repress.  What is it?  Come on.
-You're smiling.  Tell Pkunky the secret.  Come on, nasty alien gonna tell Birdy Pkunky big secret?
+What is it?  I see a smile.
 You're smiling.  Tell Pkunky the secret.
 Come on, nasty alien gonna tell Birdy Pkunky big secret?
 #(why_ilwrath_fight)
 This is just my impression, but they seem rather hostile. Why is that?
@@ -543,7 +547,7 @@ How are you faring in the fight against them?
 We have calculated that at our present rate of attrition
 we will exist only on the spiritual plane in a matter of a year or so.
 Of course, the physical realm does hold a certain coarse attraction
-a material type quaintness, if you will.
+a material quaintness, if you will.
 We will be somewhat disappointed to have to leave it.
 #(how_goes_war)
@@ -552,17 +556,17 @@ Do you have any helpful advice for me?
 #(WAR_GOES_1)	pkunk071.ogg
 Well, not advice exactly, but I can offer you plenty of moral support.
-Also, I can tell you about another dream.  Yes, perhaps I will tell you
+Also, I can tell you about another dream.  Yes, perhaps I will tell you about my dream.
-about my dream.  In this dream there was a small creature, fragile
+In this dream there was a small creature, fragile and weak.
-and weak.  Above it loomed a much larger creature, dark and
+Above it loomed a much larger creature, dark and foreboding.
-foreboding.  The large creature was preparing to take the smaller one
+The large creature was preparing to take the smaller one into its slavering jaws
-into its slavering jaws, when the little one looked up and said,
+when the little one looked up and said,
 `Hold!  Why do you do this!  What you are doing is wrong!'
 This made the large creature pause, while it pondered the question.
 Then I woke up, and I'm not sure if the little creature got eaten or not.
 Come to think of it, it really wasn't much of a dream.
 I would have much preferred Awkky Birdy's dream.
-Anyway just thought I would tell you about that.
+Anyway, just thought I would tell you about that.
 #(WAR_GOES_2)	pkunk072.ogg
 I can only tell you to contemplate the small gobbet stone.
@@ -620,8 +624,7 @@ or the 7 dimensions of psychic beings.
 It was not until Weeny Wikki Beeki Birdi sat on the mystical egg of Icelike Temperature
 and gave the Original Squawk
 `Rup-Rup-Rup-BGAK!'
-that our transformation began.
+that our transformation began.  It was the Squawk
 It was the Squawk
 `Rup-Rup-Rup-BGAK!'
 that triggered the Harmonic Oscillations that would lead us to become the enlightened avians that we are.
@@ -645,9 +648,8 @@ Just off the top of my beak, I suppose I would say
 that our culture could be defined as the ultimate unification
 or Oneness if you will
 of the extradimensional convergent-chakra being-energies
-to form a togetherness self which both is
+to form a togetherness self
-and is not
+which both is and is not a culmination of the now essence.
 a culmination of the now essence.
 #(elaborate_culture)
 Do you refer to the Now Essence as an extension of the Cosmic Whole, or as a subset of the totality of Oneness?
@@ -655,7 +657,7 @@ Do you refer to the Now Essence as an extension of the Cosmic Whole, or as a sub
 #(OK_ELABORATE_CULTURE)	pkunk080.ogg
 An excellent question. The answer is in itself, an answer, containing the explanation you seek.
 And more!
-Let me just say the revelation includes the mysteries of Pyramid Power
+Let me say the revelation includes the mysteries of Pyramid Power
 which is merely a subset of the greater and more general Pointy Power.
 UFO's and FO's are significant, but their role should not be overplayed.
 I'm sorry, but I can be no more specific than that.
@@ -681,9 +683,9 @@ Yes, you are right. I should be careful not to overwhelm you with my psychic int
 Perhaps we could talk something less overwhelming, albeit less interesting.
 #(ABOUT_US)	pkunk083.ogg
-Not at all, we are after all a fascinating species. Of course, modesty prevents
+Not at all, we are after all a fascinating species.
-me from talking at length, although perhaps if you were to ask me specific
+Of course, modesty prevents me from talking at length
-questions, propriety might be better served.
+although perhaps if you were to ask me specific questions, propriety might be better served.
 #(where_fleet_1)
 Where are all your ships?
@@ -709,10 +711,12 @@ from joining our long-lost Yehat brothers and sisters.
 This time we shall not fail.
 #(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_1)	pkunk087.ogg
-RETURNING FROM YEHAT 1
+We have consulted with our inner chickadees, and must hurry home.
 Farewell, somehwat-enlightened mammal.
 #(RETURNING_FROM_YEHAT_2)	pkunk088.ogg
-RETURNING FROM YEHAT 2
+We must make haste, Captain!
 To the nest!  The nest!
 #(am_worried_1)
 Frankly, Pkunk, I believe the Yehat will barbecue your peaceful crusaders. Recall them, please!
@@ -751,7 +755,7 @@ We are friendly beings who seek to establish friendly relations with your specie
 #(GO_TO_HOMEWORLD)	pkunk092.ogg
 Although we Pkunk have no rank, no pecking order, no arbitrary scheme of dominance
 we do recognize that some of the souls in this universe have lived many lives
-while others are but spiritual tyros.
+while others are but spiritual chickadees.
 I, Captain, have lived thirty-eight lives
 a paltry number compared to those wise and ancient souls who guide our race.
 You must consult them, Captain. They will help you to understand yourself
@@ -787,8 +791,8 @@ Duty calls. I must go now.
 #(NEUTRAL_GOODBYE_SPACE)	pkunk096.ogg
 Yes, by all means, if duty is calling. I'm sure we'll see each other again.
-Perhaps when the stars are aligned in an appropriate configuration. Yes, my
+Perhaps when the stars are aligned in an appropriate configuration.
-inner voice is telling me that is correct. When the stars align, Captain...
+Yes, my inner voice is telling me that is correct. When the stars align, Captain...
 #(SHIP_GIFT)	pkunk097.ogg
 Since you are our friends
@@ -815,21 +819,23 @@ Farewell kind human. Return soon.
 #(ALMOST_ALLIANCE)	pkunk101.ogg
 Let us unite and form an alliance!!
-We will provide you with all of the crew, ships, and resources that you desire.
+We will provide you with all of the crew, ships, and resources you desire.
-We will give you.....wait!  I sense that you are offended by our crass material offer.
+We will give you.....wait!
 I sense that you are offended by our crass material offer.
 Yes, I am ashamed.  Any war mongering species could offer this... we are Pkunk!...Children of the Stellar Breeze!
-We shall give you what all others could not! The greatest of gifts!  We shall give you our love.
+We shall give you what all others could not! The greatest of gifts!
 We shall give you our love.
 Ah, you are speechless.  Do not talk now.  I can feel the energy connecting us.
 Let us part while the silence remains. Farewell...
 #(INIT_NO_ROOM)	pkunk102.ogg
-but wait!  before we go, we would give you a small token of our love
+But wait!  Before we go, we would give you a small token of our love,
 4 of our meager ships, fully crewed
 but alas, you do not possess sufficient room in your fleet for all of the ships we wish to give you.
 Ah, well. Such are the vagaries of life...
 #(INIT_SHIP_GIFT)	pkunk103.ogg
-but wait!  before we go, as a small token of our love
+But wait!  Before we go, as a small token of our love,
 not as a material gift, mind you, we give you 4 of our meager ships, fully crewed.
 Good luck!
@@ -861,7 +867,7 @@ waiting for you at our homeworld.  Use them in good health, and with love.
 Ahh, vague omens and mysterious portents.  Tangled webs of fate
 intertwined with the branches of destiny, blown by the capricious winds of happenstance.
 News, news....uh, actually there is some news!
-It so happens that it has come to our attention that Dogar and Kazon
+It just so happens that it has come to our attention that Dogar and Kazon
 the two gods of the Ilwrath, may actually be a hoax.
 We don't know who this hoax would have been perpetrated by
 but it seems someone has used these fictitious gods
@@ -874,7 +880,8 @@ we also recently went back and listened carefully to a recording of one of their
 which was sent to the Ilwrath on HyperWave channel 44.
 We were able to detect some giggling at the end of the message.
 Someone out there is playing some kind of joke on the Ilwrath. Or is it a joke on us?
-We're not quite sure, but it may be awhile before we can look back and fully appreciate the humor.
+We're not quite sure, but what with all the vaporized planets and total carnage
 it may be a while before we can look back and fully appreciate the humor.
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_3)	pkunk109.ogg
 News? Here is news.  Did you know that the lovely clear spindle which we gave you
@@ -888,7 +895,7 @@ We hope you like it.
 I believe we may have mentioned that the clear spindle thing-a-ma-jig
 has two other pieces that fit together with it.
 Just the other day one of our psychics, while in the Trance of Plam Prikky
-cried out the location of one of these curious alien widgy whatsits.
+cried out the location of one of these curious alien widgy-whatsits.
 Perhaps you are interested.  Just before she fainted she said
 `A Sphere of Rosy Color, a Ball of Red
 grasped by the greedy hands of a Foul Race deep in Persei. The sphere waits.
@@ -911,8 +918,7 @@ Quite a dream, eh?
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_6)	pkunk112.ogg
 Yes.  We have good news!  Well, that is to say, we have no news.
 But it is good news.
-Hmmmmm.
+Hmmmmm. This is your expression, human Captain. We Pkunk do not pretend to understand it.
 This is your expression, human Captain. We Pkunk do not pretend to understand it.
 #(GENERAL_INFO_SPACE_7)	pkunk113.ogg
 I am afraid that our good, no-news is still the same.
@@ -933,7 +939,8 @@ called ArilouLaleelay, or LalilouArilay, or LoopylooHappyday, or something like
 Also I sense that you will have 14 children, and die at an early age.
 #(FORTUNE_IS_2)	pkunk116.ogg
-Let me call upon the spirits of light. Spirits of Light! Hellooo!
+Let me call upon the spirits of light.
 Spirits of Light! Hellooo!
 Spirits!! Ah yes, I feel them approaching. Spirits of Liiiight
 what is in store for this strange but not altogether unpleasing alien creature?....
 The Spirits now speak through me - I gaze with a strange intensity
@@ -969,9 +976,9 @@ As a matter of fact, our last successful contact with the world beyond
 was when my cousin Braky channeled an angry 5000 year-old warrior named Rumdumdaddy.
 He explained that the spirits have been so busy answering summonings
 pushing around the little Ouija thingies and acting as guides to Astral travellers
-that they havn't had a speck of time to themselves.
+that they haven't had a speck of time to themselves.
 Through Braky's voice, Rumdumdaddy complained that we should all be more respectful of the dead
-and stop hassling them all the time, just leave them alone.
+and stop hassling them all the time, and just leave them alone.
 Ever since then, we can't get squat out of the spirit world.
 #(FORTUNE_IS_6)	pkunk120.ogg
@@ -987,7 +994,7 @@ Sorry.
 #(FORTUNE_IS_8)	pkunk122.ogg
 We have exhausted our capacity to foretell your future, Captain. Sorry.
-#(OUT_TAKES) pkunk124.ogg
+#(OUT_TAKES)
 Ah, a final parting with our favorite seeker of enlightenment... how sad.
 But wait! This doesn't have to be the end!
 We have established a conduit from the reams of our Harmonic Awareness directly to you!
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 #(HOSTILE_HELLO_2) 5198,8472,5458
 #(HOSTILE_HELLO_3) 5187,3706,4466,4537,8422,4186,8983
 #(HOSTILE_HELLO_4) 5297
-#(REWARD_AT_HOMEWORLD_1) 6780,7721,6679,4226
+#(REWARD_AT_HOMEWORLD_1) 7396,7338,6727
 #(REWARD_AT_HOMEWORLD_2) 5989,5147
 #(POST_ZOMBIE_HWLD_HELLO) 7290,7010,9153,7872,3555
 #(owe_me_big_time) 
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
 #(so_what_for_now) 
 #(DO_THIS_NOW) 12979,7781,9794,6820,4947,5678,8732,6640,10435,7110,7140,8212,4016,5157,6380,4686,9554
 #(bye_post_zombie) 
-#(FUNNY_IDEA) 7070,4947,6910,7120,591,5849,5367,5809,5618,3675
+#(FUNNY_IDEA) 7236,4909,7008,7297,6338,5200,5777,6110,3466
 #(whats_up_pre_zombie) 
 #(GENERAL_INFO_PRE_ZOMBIE) 7601,8602,10135,3715,6760
 #(evil_blobbies_give_up) 
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@
 #(evil_blobbies_must_die) 
 #(OH_NO_WE_WONT) 
 #(can_we_be_friends) 
-#(SURE_FRIENDS) 4867,9344,5358
+#(SURE_FRIENDS) 5266,9607
 #(want_to_defeat_urquan) 
 #(FINE_BY_US) 6429,9924,10115,8803,5788
 #(bye_pre_zombie) 
@@ -76,9 +76,9 @@
 #(come_in_peace) 
 #(GOOD_FOR_YOU_2) 4307
 #(know_any_jokes) 
-#(JOKE_1) 3956,3154,1162
+#(JOKE_1) 4049,3228,1170,2550
 #(better_joke) 
-#(JOKE_2) 5968,7852,4396,1152
+#(JOKE_2) 6416,7648,4458,1210,1481
 #(not_very_funny) 
 #(YES_WE_ARE) 5719
 #(what_about_tpet) 
@@ -2,11 +2,11 @@
 Why HELLO human Earthling! Har! Har! Har!
 Must say, your appearance here comes as quite surprise to us!
 We never expected to see any of you ever again
-after Ur-Quan masters put your species under slave shield!
+after our Ur-Quan masters put your species under slave shield!
 #(HWLD_PRE_ZOMBIE_HELLO_2)	umgah001.ogg
 Hey look everybody! Human Earthling came back!
-Har! Har! Har! Wonder if we'll kill him this time?
+Har! Har! Har! Say, I wonder we'll kill him this time?
 Har! Har! Har!
 #(HWLD_PRE_ZOMBIE_HELLO_3)	umgah002.ogg
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ You're back? Har! Har! Har! More fun! More fun!
 Howdy human Earthling! Back for more fun?
 #(SPACE_PRE_ZOMBIE_HELLO_1)	umgah004.ogg
-Well bloat my belly! It a human Earthling!
+Well bloat my belly! It's a human Earthling!
 Har! Har! Har! Haven't seen a human Earthling since... since
 why heck! NEVER seen a human Earthling!
 What coincidence!
@@ -25,35 +25,35 @@ What coincidence!
 Hi there human! How old fluid sacks today?
 What?! You don't HAVE fluid sacks?
 Har! Har! Har! What do you call your mate then?!! Har! Har! Har!...
-you don't HAVE mate?
+you don't HAVE a mate?
 THAT'S EVEN FUNNIER! Har! Har! Har!
 #(SPACE_PRE_ZOMBIE_HELLO_3)	umgah006.ogg
 Hi there, human Earthling! What'cha here for today?
-What? Can't quite hear you? You have to speak up!
+What? Can't quite hear you? You'll have to speak up!
 Hey! What problem here?
 Human Earthling making fun of me?
 THIS SOME KIND OF STUPID HUMAN EARTHLING TRICK? BECAUSE IF IS
 Har! Har! Har!... fooled ya, didn't I?
 #(SPACE_PRE_ZOMBIE_HELLO_4)	umgah007.ogg
-Yo! Human Earthling! What up?!
+Yo! Human Earthling! What up?!  Har! Har! Har!
 #(UNKNOWN_ZOMBIE_HELLO_1)	umgah008.ogg
 HELLO. HUMAN. EARTHLING.
-HAR.
+HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(UNKNOWN_ZOMBIE_HELLO_2)	umgah009.ogg
 HAPPY. GREETINGS. AND. WELCOME. EARTHLING. HUMAN.
-HAR.
+HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(UNKNOWN_ZOMBIE_HELLO_3)	umgah010.ogg
 WHAT. SO. FUNNY. HUMAN. EARTHLING. YOUR. FACE. FUNNY. THING.
-HAR.
+HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(UNKNOWN_ZOMBIE_HELLO_4)	umgah011.ogg
 WE. FUNNY. UMGAH. SO. FUNNY.
-HAR.
+HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(DESTROY_INTERFERER_1)	umgah012.ogg
 THE. HUMAN. INTERFERES. WITH. PLAN.
@@ -90,12 +90,12 @@ Har! Har! Har! We pretty crazy blobbies, no?!
 #(HOSTILE_HELLO_2)	umgah021.ogg
 Well pop my pupae! It human Earthling again!
 It just doesn't learn, does it? To Arms! To Arms!... wait a minute! Don't HAVE any arms!
-AIEE!! MY ARMS!! WHO HAS STOLEN MY ARMS!!! AIEEE!! ARM THIEF!!!
+AIEE!! MY ARMS!! MY ARMS!! WHO HAS STOLEN MY ARMS!!! AIEEE!! ARM THIEF!!!
 Har! Har! Har!... Never HAD any arms! Har! Har! Har!
 #(HOSTILE_HELLO_3)	umgah022.ogg
-Look, we all decided that our treating you this way
+Look, we all decided that our treating you this way,
-and by that mean, attacking you without mercy all time
+attacking you without mercy all time,
 well, we decided that it just plain unfair.
 REALLY, after all things you've done for our people!
 So we decided to make you our honorary KING! Congratulations!
@@ -112,7 +112,6 @@ Hurray! Hurray! It human Earthling! Our Savior!!
 Oh hurry, human Earthling, HURRY! Your reward awaits at our homeworld!
 In case you have forgotten, that at Beta Orionis!
 Hurry, human Earthling, HURRY!
 (Har! Har! Har!)
 #(REWARD_AT_HOMEWORLD_2)	umgah025.ogg
 Hust! Hust! You must make haste, human Earthling!
@@ -159,9 +158,9 @@ Vigorous esters?... no, too common.
 HAVE IT! HAVE IT! GENETIC MODIFICATION!! YES! IT PERFECT GIFT!!
 Listen human Earthling! We add some extra eyes! A few tentacles!
 Other organs of whatever size and shape you desire!!
-What?! You not want more organs?... How strange... how sad.
+What?! You not want more organs?... You sure?... How strange... how sad.
 This was best gift. We Umgah have nothing but vast supply of biological skills and data.
-Huh? What did you say?
+Huh? What you say?
 You want Biological Data?! Just plain raw Biological Data?
 What you do with it?
 Oh, well, you Hero. Whatever you want, you get.
@@ -170,18 +169,18 @@ Oh, well, you Hero. Whatever you want, you get.
 So how did that Talking Pet get control of your species?
 #(TRICK_URQUAN)	umgah029.ogg
-Well Ariloulaleelay, who kind of our neighbors, gave us Talking Pet
+Ah, well Arilou Lalee'lay, who kind of our neighbors, gave us Talking Pet
 hoping we could heal it more severe injuries, which we did.
 While we working on it, we do routine brain structure scan
-and discovered that creature had extemely sophisticated set of neural pathways
+and discovered that creature have extemely sophisticated set of neural pathways
 even more complex than own!
 Further analysis showed that with minor genetic manipulations
 Talking Pet intelligence greatly expanded, perhaps even to sentience!
 Little did know what monster we creating.
-Only a few hours after injected nanots with modification program, creature wakes up.
+Only few hours after injected nanots with modification program, creature wakes up.
 Almost immediately, took control of Hospital... then city... then whole planet.
-We try to resist, but creature, even in a drugged, weakened state, too strong.
+We try to resist, but creature, even in drugged, weakened state, too strong.
-From that day on, we just mindless slaves who lived only serve Talking Pet, and `Big Plan'.
+From that day on, we just mindless slaves who live only serve Talking Pet, and `Big Plan'.
 What `Big Plan'?
 We never quite sure about details of `Big Plan', except it involved getting revenge
 and mean LOTS of revenge...
@@ -213,7 +212,7 @@ Hmmm... as general rule, corpses aren't too much fun.
 When we were first starting to mess with its brain
 our intention to get it smart enough to accept orders from us
 and then repeat them as though they legitimate Ur-Quan commands.
-Har! Har! Har! We going to play a little joke this way!
+Har! Har! Har! Har! We going to play little joke this way!
 We going to use Talking Pet to order Spathi to attack VUX!
 Har! Har Har! That been great! ZAP! ZAP! KABOOM!!! Har! Har! Har!...
 ...even better than old Dogar and Kazon routine we pull on Ilwrath few years back
@@ -226,10 +225,10 @@ So, since I'm your Great Hero Guy, tell me all your secrets.
 Secrets, huh? You want secrets? OUR SECRETS!? YOU MADE FATAL MISTAKE, HUMAN!!
 ... Har! Har! Har! Good joke, eh? Scared you!
 Sure! We'll tell our secrets. Now let me see... what ARE secrets?
-Oh, yeah!... remember! It about Mycons!
+Oh, yes!... remember! It about Mycons!
 You see, Mycons only other race we know of
 that have same kind of biotechincal skills as Umgah.
-But amazing thing that they do all with their own bodies, don't need tools.
+But amazing thing, they do all with their own bodies, don't need tools.
 They just THINK genetic modification, and it happen!
 We found that pretty hard understand, so when nobody looking, we clonk one on head
 bring it back here to homeworld and slice it up for detailed study.
@@ -239,7 +238,7 @@ We don't know who made them or for what purpose
 but they WAY beyond anything we ever heard of.
 We not figure out much more before tissue samples all gross
 so guess that pretty much all of big secret.
-Oh... do us a favor? Please not tell anybody about clonking Mycon.
+Oh... do us favor? Please not tell anybody about clonking Mycon.
 It kind of against Ur-Quan Laws, and not want get Mycons mad at us.
 #(bye_post_zombie)
@@ -249,9 +248,8 @@ Well, your Great Hero must leave now, but rest assured, I'll be back.
 You know, Great Hero... I getting this funny feeling.
 Would like to know what feeling is? Good, I tell you.
 My feeling that Great Hero stuff... well, boring... not funny at all.
-You only say HAIL! HAIL! HAIL! so many times before starts to lose appeal
+You only say HAIL! HAIL! HAIL! so many times before starts to lose appeal,
-so
+so... instituting slight deviation in course of our relationship.
 instituting slight deviation in course of our relationship.
 Specifically, instead of being dull and lifeless Great Hero
 you now glamorous and exciting... Great Enemy!
 We give you some our Drone ships to make even more interesting!
@@ -264,7 +262,7 @@ Umgah! Reveal your secrets!
 #(GENERAL_INFO_PRE_ZOMBIE)	umgah035.ogg
 Okay, since you ask so nicely, we will tell you a thing or two.
 For instance, did know that even now we performing surgery on Talking Pet?
-Arilou found it alone and dying in wreck of Ur-Quan Dreadnought on Alpha Pavonis .
+Arilou found it alone and dying in wreck of Ur-Quan Dreadnought on Alpha Pavonis.
 They couldn't heal so they brought to us.
 We discovered that animal has potential for high intelligence
 provided we make few minor genetic modifications.
@@ -289,7 +287,6 @@ Look, I know we've had our differences in the past, but can't we be friends?
 Sure! Sure! Friends for sure!
 Who cares about boring old Ur-Quan and their slave laws? Har! Har! Har!
 Here we come to say hello to new friends!
 (Har! Har! Har!)
 #(want_to_defeat_urquan)
 Here's our credo: Freedom from Ur-Quan! What do you say?
@@ -297,7 +294,7 @@ Here's our credo: Freedom from Ur-Quan! What do you say?
 #(FINE_BY_US)	umgah039.ogg
 Har! Har! Har! Freedom very good thing!
 It so much easier to make good jokes without boring old Ur-Quan slave laws!
-We wanting to pull a real good one on those stupid nosers from Draconis for long time
+We wanting to pull real good one on those stupid nosers from Draconis for long time
 but since they battle thralls too, we not allowed do even small pranks on them
 like, say... dropping planetoid in their ocean.
 Big waves! Big waves! Har! Har! Har!
@@ -390,6 +387,7 @@ JOKE. YES. JOKE. HERE. IS. JOKE.
 WHEN. IS. A. SLAVE. NOT. A. SLAVE.
 ANSWER.
 WHEN. HE. IS. A. SLAVE. MASTER.
 HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(better_joke)
 Uh... that wasn't very funny. Can't you do better?
@@ -400,6 +398,7 @@ WHAT. YOU. GET. WHEN. COMBINE. DEUTERIUM. PELLET. TERAWATT. LASER.
 AND. PRIMITIVE. EARTH. LEADER. FROM. ASIAN. STEPPES.
 ANSWER.
 KHAN. FUSION.
 HAR.  HAR.  HAR.
 #(not_very_funny)
 Ugh! That wasn't a very good joke either. I don't think you guys are very funny.