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Melnorme subtitle fixes: Dnyarri spelling, punctuation

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@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ Shall we begin trading now?
#(WERE_NOT_AFRAID) melnorme-010.ogg #(WERE_NOT_AFRAID) melnorme-010.ogg
We reel with inchoate fear, and are thrown into a sudden panic. We reel with inchoate fear, and are thrown into a sudden panic.
Being peaceful by nature Being peaceful by nature
We would no doubt be unprepared for your sudden hostility we would no doubt be unprepared for your sudden hostility
were it not for the excellent weapon system we bought from the Keel-Verezy just last month. were it not for the excellent weapon system we bought from the Keel-Verezy just last month.
A weapon system which is fully locked on your command bridge, by the way. A weapon system which is fully locked on your command bridge, by the way.
@@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ I don't need your help at this time. Maybe later, though.
#(RESCUE_OFFER) melnorme-045.ogg #(RESCUE_OFFER) melnorme-045.ogg
You have no Credit balance in our mercantile computer You have no Credit balance in our mercantile computer
and our scanners show you that you possess no useful trade goods and our scanners show that you possess no useful trade goods
but, perhaps we can work out a special deal. but, perhaps we can work out a special deal.
In exchange for our giving you enough fuel to In exchange for our giving you enough fuel to
@@ -844,7 +844,7 @@ Actually, we don't know what the Orz did to the Androsynth -- they're just all g
#(OK_BUY_ALIEN_RACE_11) melnorme-109.ogg #(OK_BUY_ALIEN_RACE_11) melnorme-109.ogg
The Arilou Lalee'lay are a mysterious race of IDF beings The Arilou Lalee'lay are a mysterious race of IDF beings
IDF meaning, Inter-Dimensional Fatigue IDF meaning, Inter-Dimensional Fatigue.
They do not reside in this galaxy, or in fact, anywhere in this universe. They do not reside in this galaxy, or in fact, anywhere in this universe.
While it is true that the Arilou are rarely seen far from the Columbae star group While it is true that the Arilou are rarely seen far from the Columbae star group
they do make regular, secret visits to your world, and have done so for centuries. they do make regular, secret visits to your world, and have done so for centuries.
@@ -952,8 +952,8 @@ Within a month, Dnyarri-compelled starships had spread the evil, psychic creatur
When the Dnyarri took control over the Milieu, one race fought back -- the Taalo. When the Dnyarri took control over the Milieu, one race fought back -- the Taalo.
These slow, quiet creatures were silicon-based life forms These slow, quiet creatures were silicon-based life forms
but bore little resemblance to the modern Chenjesu. but bore little resemblance to the modern Chenjesu.
The Taalo were natural immunes to the Dynarri psychic compulsion; they were unaffected by the creatures' power The Taalo were natural immunes to the Dnyarri psychic compulsion; they were unaffected by the creatures' power
and the Dynarri would not permit anyone to exist outside their control and the Dnyarri would not permit anyone to exist outside their control
so they ordered the remaining races of the Milieu to attack and destroy the Taalo home planet. so they ordered the remaining races of the Milieu to attack and destroy the Taalo home planet.
This planet was one of the few Milieu worlds located in this region of space. This planet was one of the few Milieu worlds located in this region of space.
I believe you call their star Delta Vulpeculae. Their home was a moon revolving about the second planet. I believe you call their star Delta Vulpeculae. Their home was a moon revolving about the second planet.
@@ -970,7 +970,7 @@ As the centuries of Dnyarri dominance passed, what was once the Sentient Milieu
deteriorated and degenerated into a great galactic gulag. deteriorated and degenerated into a great galactic gulag.
Alien races which did not serve with the efficiency and speed demanded by the Dnyarri Alien races which did not serve with the efficiency and speed demanded by the Dnyarri
were ruthlessly burned from the faces of their worlds. were ruthlessly burned from the faces of their worlds.
The agents of this genocide were inevitably the Dynarri's favored pet, the Ur-Quan. The agents of this genocide were inevitably the Dnyarri's favored pet, the Ur-Quan.
After almost twenty-five hundred years of unrelenting Dnyarri control After almost twenty-five hundred years of unrelenting Dnyarri control
there were only four living member races of the once-great Sentient Milieu. there were only four living member races of the once-great Sentient Milieu.
By this point, the Dnyarri had used genetic manipulation to split the Ur-Quan into two sub-species: By this point, the Dnyarri had used genetic manipulation to split the Ur-Quan into two sub-species:
@@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ By this point in history, the Dnyarri had grown lax in their dominance
and on occasion accidentally permitted their slaves moments of self-direction. and on occasion accidentally permitted their slaves moments of self-direction.
Kzer-Za was able to use those few scattered minutes to compose a theory. Kzer-Za was able to use those few scattered minutes to compose a theory.
From its observations, Kzer-Za realized that when a slave died From its observations, Kzer-Za realized that when a slave died
the Dynarri `disconnected' from the slave's mind, lest it too be dragged down to death. the Dnyarri `disconnected' from the slave's mind, lest it too be dragged down to death.
Further, the Ur-Quan scientist uncovered the fact that when a slave underwent great pain Further, the Ur-Quan scientist uncovered the fact that when a slave underwent great pain
the Dnyarri temporarily disconnected -- but that the degree of pain had to be extreme, nearly lethal. the Dnyarri temporarily disconnected -- but that the degree of pain had to be extreme, nearly lethal.
Kzer-Za chose its moment carefully -- it waited until it was near an open transmission unit. Kzer-Za chose its moment carefully -- it waited until it was near an open transmission unit.