diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/chmmr/chmmr.txt b/sc2/content/comm/chmmr/chmmr.txt index eaa62441b..46d09189d 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/chmmr/chmmr.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/chmmr/chmmr.txt @@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ WHO ARE YOU? #(i_am_captain0) I am captain #(i_am_captain1) -of the starship + of the starship #(i_am_captain2) . diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/rebel/rebel.txt b/sc2/content/comm/rebel/rebel.txt index d1185287e..0f7ddcd33 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/rebel/rebel.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/rebel/rebel.txt @@ -75,7 +75,7 @@ It was no male who finally won the great prize, the High Perch of Caer Zeep-Reep No, Captain, it was a female!... a wise and powerful Queen... the first of the Veep-Neep Dynasty. In exchange fer the Clans' fealty, she gave a simple, compelling promise. She guaranteed that united under her wing, the Clans would NEVER suffer defeat! -And she kept her promise. At long last, there was peace on our world.\n +And she kept her promise. At long last, there was peace on our world. Her line kept true to this promise fer over twenty centuries soothing ruffled feathers, dispensing justice, stamping out foment but then came the present Queen... a true harridan! @@ -138,7 +138,7 @@ the Shofixti must have realized they could not win but at least they could insure that both sides would lose. They must have detonated the device in the outer layer of their sun. The sudden removal of a section of the sun's surface layers -must have allowed the pressurized plasma from the interior to burst out\n +must have allowed the pressurized plasma from the interior to burst out like a miniature super nova. #(what_about_vux) diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/spahome/spahome.txt b/sc2/content/comm/spahome/spahome.txt index fa483a23d..8a46de53c 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/spahome/spahome.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/spahome/spahome.txt @@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ I'm not surprised. We certainly won't go there. Why should you be any less craven than ourselves? #(TEST_AGAIN) spaho050.ogg -You must wipe the Evil Ones from the face of Spathiwa!\n +You must wipe the Evil Ones from the face of Spathiwa! They are creatures from the darkest pits of hell whose relentless passion for our fleshy parts forced us to abandon our otherwise wonderful homeworld @@ -442,7 +442,7 @@ We killed them all, yup we sure did. #(WILL_CHECK_1) spaho053.ogg This is wonderful -- too good to be true! We will immediately begin transporting Spathi from this unpleasant moon down to the safe surface. -We shall send encrustlings and the infirm elderly first, as a special honor!\n +We shall send encrustlings and the infirm elderly first, as a special honor! Please come back later to receive your accolades. #(WILL_CHECK_2) spaho054.ogg diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt b/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt index edca51d6a..860f5359f 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt @@ -325,7 +325,7 @@ Until then, Earthling. #(MUST_ACT) syree028.ogg Captain. The secret of the Mycon's monstrous murder of our planet has changed the attitudes of many of my people. -We will not sit here and do nothing while the Mcyon fiends are free to roam the galaxy, perpetrating their evil.\n +We will not sit here and do nothing while the Mycon fiends are free to roam the galaxy, perpetrating their evil. You wanted our cooperation in fighting the Ur-Quan. You've got it... provided you first help us seek our revenge against the Mycon race... help us to destroy them! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt b/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt index fa31eb6be..e0d0f528d 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt @@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ This had better be important. #(CYBORG_PEP_TALK) talkp040.ogg You've made it, Captain! The Sa-Matra is defenseless. -Now all you have to do is maneuver your ship next to the Sa-Matra and initiate the bomb sequence.\n +Now all you have to do is maneuver your ship next to the Sa-Matra and initiate the bomb sequence. In case you're wondering, I'm not going with you, Captain. I'm staying on board. Why, you ask? BECAUSE I'M LOCKED IN HERE -- THAT'S WHY! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt index 2103437e9..41e0a0057 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt @@ -173,7 +173,7 @@ We do not know who they are, or why they are here. #(UNDER_ATTACK2) zoqfo060.ogg We are being blown to bits. #(UNDER_ATTACK3) zoqfo061.ogg -Fleets of alien ships appear out of nowhere\n +Fleets of alien ships appear out of nowhere then unleash terrible destructive energies. #(UNDER_ATTACK4) zoqfo062.ogg Fortunately @@ -183,7 +183,7 @@ they release these energies on each other. Unfortunately #(UNDER_ATTACK7) zoqfo065.ogg they favor combat near strong gravity wells. -Their stray shots regularly strike the surface of our planets\n +Their stray shots regularly strike the surface of our planets often with tragic results. #(UNDER_ATTACK8) zoqfo066.ogg Fortunately