From c51f301a416c43e3bebab4553d061dfbd78e9983 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: avolkov Date: Fri, 24 Nov 2006 19:38:00 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] Removed erroneous ellipses from manually typed texts (checked against original dialog); fixed some typos git-svn-id: svn://svn.code.sf.net/p/sc2/code/trunk@2531 8092fc87-c524-0410-9efc-e669fe64eaf9 --- sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt | 8 ++++---- sc2/content/comm/druuge/druuge.txt | 12 ++++++------ sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt | 4 ++-- sc2/content/comm/shofixt/shofixt.txt | 10 +++++----- sc2/content/comm/slyhome/slyhome.txt | 4 ++-- sc2/content/comm/spathi/spathi.txt | 2 +- sc2/content/comm/starbas/starbas.txt | 4 ++-- sc2/content/comm/supox/supox.txt | 4 ++-- sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt | 8 ++++---- sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt | 8 ++++---- sc2/content/comm/urquan/urquan.txt | 14 +++++++------- sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt | 18 +++++++++--------- sc2/content/comm/vux/vux.txt | 10 +++++----- sc2/content/comm/yehat/yehat.txt | 8 ++++---- sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt | 8 ++++---- 15 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 61 deletions(-) diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt b/sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt index 6cb1bbf68..ff0c798fd 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/blackur/blackur.txt @@ -384,11 +384,11 @@ Your efforts to resist us are futile. You are defeated! #(OUT_TAKES) black045.ogg -We are the Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah... -...The followers of the Path of Now and Forever! +We are the Ur-Quan Kohr-Ah +The followers of the Path of Now and Forever! You are filth. We shall cleanse. You WILL be annigilated... I mean annihigated.. damn! CUT! CUT! Let's start over! -Hey, mister director... can you PLEASE think of SOME other word besides... -...agnigilate... I mean, oh what's the use. I give up. +Hey, mister director... can you PLEASE think of SOME other word besides +agnigilate... I mean, oh what's the use. I give up. diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/druuge/druuge.txt b/sc2/content/comm/druuge/druuge.txt index 3aec271d2..4c5c89200 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/druuge/druuge.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/druuge/druuge.txt @@ -550,13 +550,13 @@ I feel so lucky, Captain, that you did not have the forethought to arrive here w Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! #(OUT_TAKES) druug076.ogg -I hope you know that contract negotiations are going to be very rough... -...for my role in the sequel... yes, rough indeed. To begin with... -...I want ten percent of the royalties, creative control over my dialog... -...and a fat cut of the toy licenses. +I hope you know that contract negotiations are going to be very rough +for my role in the sequel... yes, rough indeed. To begin with +I want ten percent of the royalties, creative control over my dialog +and a fat cut of the toy licenses. What!? What did you say?! The sequel is going to be all about ME? -How wonderful! What an honor! What a great chance to move up the ladder towards... -...PRODUCER! +How wonderful! What an honor! What a great chance to move up the ladder towards +PRODUCER! Forget everything I said about license fees! It's an honor just to work with you! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt b/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt index 0dfa3c988..e7ac4119b 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt @@ -999,8 +999,8 @@ Ah, a final parting with our favorite seeker of enlightenment... how sad. But wait! This doesn't have to be the end! We have established a conduit from the reams of our Harmonic Awareness directly to you! You can use this channel to ask us questions about your past lives, or your future destiny! -Just call 1-900-PKUNKRA... -...That's 1-900-PKUNKRA, 24 hours a day! +Just call 1-900-PKUNKRA +That's 1-900-PKUNKRA, 24 hours a day! Only two bucks per minute. (children under 18 must have parental permission before calling.) diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/shofixt/shofixt.txt b/sc2/content/comm/shofixt/shofixt.txt index cce49cb69..af3fa7106 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/shofixt/shofixt.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/shofixt/shofixt.txt @@ -365,11 +365,11 @@ Nothing new to report, sir. #(OUT_TAKES) shofi046.ogg Ah, I see someone approaches, but who is it? -Ho, ho! It is the creature which I wrongly called a disgusting Ur-Quan slimewad... -...and a cowardly slug-spawn... -...and a pouchless lard-log freak... -...and a leprous, non-functional sex organ... -...and a wallowing, phlegm-filled Ogrunti belly-licker. +Ho, ho! It is the creature which I wrongly called a disgusting Ur-Quan slimewad +and a cowardly slug-spawn +and a pouchless lard-log freak +and a leprous, non-functional sex organ +and a wallowing, phlegm-filled Ogrunti belly-licker. HA! My human friend has returned! So what am I doing here, you ask? I'M TRYING TO GET SOME REST, THAT'S WHAT!!! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/slyhome/slyhome.txt b/sc2/content/comm/slyhome/slyhome.txt index 924f83108..d6d99ba7d 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/slyhome/slyhome.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/slyhome/slyhome.txt @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ Why did the Melnorme sell it to you? The Melnorme traded it to us for data on the life on Source. They said the information was unique, and was worth oh, I don't really understand their units of exchange -somthing like 10,000 Gree-dots... or something like that. +something like 10,000 Gree-dots... or something like that. Fortunately, that was EXACTLY the price of their catalog item 2418 Remote Self-Replicating Robot Explorer Probe. @@ -523,7 +523,7 @@ and Analyze Data at three. I told Joyous Lifting to set it a bit higher let me ask him what he set it to... Oh! My! That was a bit extreme, wasn't it? Joyous Lifting told me he changed it to nine hundred ninety-nine -...the highest setting on the dial. +the highest setting on the dial. #(enough_problem) Let's talk more about this later on. diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/spathi/spathi.txt b/sc2/content/comm/spathi/spathi.txt index b23368822..8e77016de 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/spathi/spathi.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/spathi/spathi.txt @@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ no... the Huge-glands, no, I remember, the Hunams! Hello, Hunam, what would you like to threaten me about today? #(INIT_FRIENDLY_HELLO_SPACE) spath040.ogg -Hello friend Hunam! How nice to see you again. Kill any one today? +Hello friend Hunam! How nice to see you again. Kill anyone today? #(SUBSEQUENT_FRIENDLY_HELLO_SPACE) spath041.ogg ...No! No! Weapons Officer, don't fire! It's the Hunam again, you idiot! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/starbas/starbas.txt b/sc2/content/comm/starbas/starbas.txt index e8289dcb6..e24abfdb8 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/starbas/starbas.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/starbas/starbas.txt @@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ Their assistance may be crucial to our success. #(MUST_DEFEAT) starb062.ogg Captain, I wish I had an easy answer, but I don't. The only way I can see of liberating Earth, as well as the Alliance allies -...is to destroy the Ur-Quan and their armada of battle thralls entirely. +is to destroy the Ur-Quan and their armada of battle thralls entirely. #(DEFEAT_LIKE_SO) starb063.ogg To defeat our enemies, we will need awesome strength, both in your flagship and the fleet @@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ For weeks now we have been scanning space in the direction of the Tucanae stars hoping to hear some word from our Zoq-Fot-Pik allies, with no success. We must assume that something grave has happened to them. We did receive an alien broadcast however -- it rang through space like an electronic howl. -I think the best way to describe it would be... +I think the best way to describe it would be `exultant'. #(STARBASE_BULLETIN_27) starb122.ogg diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/supox/supox.txt b/sc2/content/comm/supox/supox.txt index d04b15ded..68a292054 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/supox/supox.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/supox/supox.txt @@ -401,6 +401,6 @@ Whew! I'm glad that's all over. That was tough, playing second banana to the Utwig. Now I'm hungry, but I'm sick and tired of sunlight, sunlight, sunlight! I want some REAL food!!! -Like a hamburger or a steak... better yet... -...how about a dog! +Like a hamburger or a steak... better yet +how about a dog! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt b/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt index de33f2acf..432f445e5 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/syreen/syreen.txt @@ -669,10 +669,10 @@ we will be together like this... again. #(OUT_TAKES) syree071.ogg In case you were wondering about me... don't worry! I'm doing fine! -In fact, I just talked with the designers and they have assured me... -...that the sequel will be all about me! Isn't that great! -They said they wanted to move away from the warrior mythos... -...and expand more into the healer cycle. +In fact, I just talked with the designers and they have assured me +that the sequel will be all about me! Isn't that great! +They said they wanted to move away from the warrior mythos +and expand more into the healer cycle. This may be my big chance! The only thing I'm not sure about is the new costume they want me to wear. They said this one would be REALLY revealing. diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt b/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt index ba73fbc89..2ee78d00a 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/talkpet/talkpet.txt @@ -617,11 +617,11 @@ GO ATTACK THE SA-MATRA!! #(OUT_TAKES) talkp074.ogg So! You probably thought I was dead... DIDN'T YOU!? -Well I'm not! I got away from the ship at the last second... -...and now I'm REALLY going to cause some trouble! +Well I'm not! I got away from the ship at the last second +and now I'm REALLY going to cause some trouble! In fact, that's what the sequel is going to be about! -Yeah, that's the ticket! Me and my exciting adventures... -...as I conquer the galaxy for the greater glory of... ME! +Yeah, that's the ticket! Me and my exciting adventures +as I conquer the galaxy for the greater glory of... ME! It will have action! It will have drama! It will have gratuitous alien sex scenes! It's gonna be great! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/urquan/urquan.txt b/sc2/content/comm/urquan/urquan.txt index 80b50e1a4..1dc2351da 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/urquan/urquan.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/urquan/urquan.txt @@ -382,13 +382,13 @@ Blah, blah, blah! Mary had a little lamb! I like to hold fuzzy little animals and give them huggie-wuggies. You are probably wondering why an Ur-Quan is saying such stupid things. -Well, he isn't saying them. I am... that's right -- ME... -...the little guy down in the corner. -Since I've been stuck down here for this entire game... -...translating `Submit or Die!' into about a hundred different languages... -...I just thought I'd take this opportunity to express MY feelings. +Well, he isn't saying them. I am... that's right -- ME +the little guy down in the corner. +Since I've been stuck down here for this entire game +translating `Submit or Die!' into about a hundred different languages +I just thought I'd take this opportunity to express MY feelings. You want to know what I think? -I think this whole game would have been better... -...if they'd done it as a musical! +I think this whole game would have been better +if they'd done it as a musical! That's what I think, but do the designers listen to me? NO! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt b/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt index d576fba51..912d7f9aa 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt @@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ Hmm, sounds like things were going pretty well. So what happened? Yes, things were perfect. What happened is, well, I... it is difficult to talk about. But I saw it happen. I witnessed the Chinz-Rahl celebration. I felt the Ultron fill the empty place that I did not know was there. -I saw the Grand Proctor pass it to... +I saw the Grand Proctor pass it to well, they say that the Chief Groo did not know that it was so heavy and slippery. Perhaps it was a combination of factors. Some who have reviewed the records claim it was actually a conspiracy! @@ -705,14 +705,14 @@ Taunting us buys you nothing. Go now! #(OUT_TAKES) utwig075.ogg Hello again, heroic humanoid! -Ever since you returned the Ultron to us... -...everything has been WONDERFUL... just perfect! -Within just two days our factories will begin churning out... -...appropriate facial appliances, and I have already picked out my first mask... -...the Domino of Unrivaled Merriment! -Yes, we are all ecstatic... even the High Proctor gambols... -...as she performs the Exultant Caper of Revelation! +Ever since you returned the Ultron to us +everything has been WONDERFUL... just perfect! +Within just two days our factories will begin churning out +appropriate facial appliances, and I have already picked out my first mask +the Domino of Unrivaled Merriment! +Yes, we are all ecstatic... even the High Proctor gambols +as she performs the Exultant Caper of Revelation! Look how she leaps with the Ultron held high! -How she twirls, how she slips and tosses the Ultron into the air... OH NOOooooo!!! +How she twists, how she twirls, how she slips and tosses the Ultron into the air... OH NOOooooo!!! (CRASH!!) diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/vux/vux.txt b/sc2/content/comm/vux/vux.txt index 52c5d4466..6d3b1748b 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/vux/vux.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/vux/vux.txt @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ No, Sub-Commander, this is impossible. It couldn't escape from our strongest con IT'S WHAT?!! Decks five and six?! Eleven Crewmen!! Sound the alarms, you fool! Where is it now?! Engineering, report!... Engineering?! Sub-Commander, seal Bulkhe-- Sub-Commander... are you listening to me? What are you staring at? -PAY ATTENTION, SUB- COMMANDER! Give me a report on its posit-- WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT!... +PAY ATTENTION, Sub-Commander! Give me a report on its posit-- WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT!... behind me? WH- Wh- what- wh- AIEEEEE!!!!!... @@ -205,7 +205,7 @@ that has marred our two species' relationship up to this point. Admittedly, as THE acknowledged VUX military genius I would find it interesting to face your ONE powerful, alien starship with my huge personal fleet of Intruders, but oh! What a mistake it would be. -...also... I think it only fair to warn you, Captain +Also... I think it only fair to warn you, Captain that in my campaigns I collected many interesting items. Amongst these treasures is a Precursor artifact, a warp nullification field that prevents nearby ships from making emergency HyperSpace maneuvers... from running away. @@ -514,8 +514,8 @@ We have no choice. You are too wretched. We shall eliminate you. #(OUT_TAKES) vux060.ogg Oh no! It's one of those ultra-gross humans again! Quick, hide your eye! -AGGH! Look at the pulpy red thing in its mouth... -...how it wriggles and writhes like a wet blood worm... -...and plays over the hard white nubs that protrude from its headbone! +AGGH! Look at the pulpy red thing in its mouth +how it wriggles and writhes like a wet blood worm +and plays over the hard white nubs that protrude from its headbone! I think I'm going to be sick. diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/yehat/yehat.txt b/sc2/content/comm/yehat/yehat.txt index da887507c..65a1e58f6 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/yehat/yehat.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/yehat/yehat.txt @@ -353,11 +353,11 @@ The Empire of #(name_41) #(OUT_TAKES) yehat039.ogg -So, I suppose you are wondering what I'm doing at this control console... -...well, I guess I can tell you now. +So, I suppose you are wondering what I'm doing at this control console +well, I guess I can tell you now. I'm writing a screenplay! It's an existential thriller! Kind of a cross between a Woody Allen angst-fest mixed with some of Tobe Hooper's best work. -But actually, this is just my way of getting my wing in the door, you see... -...what I really want to do is DIRECT! +But actually, this is just my way of getting my wing in the door, you see +what I really want to do is DIRECT! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt index 2a45a4f28..271881234 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt @@ -929,8 +929,8 @@ The Empire of Thank you for playing The Ur-Quan Masters. #(OUT_TAKES1) zoqfo292.ogg -This game has been brought to you by... -...Frungy! The Sport of Kings! +This game has been brought to you by +Frungy! The Sport of Kings! #(OUT_TAKES2) zoqfo293.ogg No it wasn't! @@ -940,8 +940,8 @@ Yes it was! #(OUT_TAKES4) zoqfo294.ogg Frungy had nothing to do with it! -This game was about war, slavery, intolerance... -...heroism, justice, and the inevitable triumph of Good over Evil! +This game was about war, slavery, intolerance +heroism, justice, and the inevitable triumph of Good over Evil! #(OUT_TAKES5) zoqfo291.ogg Are you crazy?! The developers got millions in Frungy endorsements!