diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/melnorm/melnorm.txt b/sc2/content/comm/melnorm/melnorm.txt index a47184367..68c711aa9 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/melnorm/melnorm.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/melnorm/melnorm.txt @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ Fees! Surely your culture is far beyond such pettiness as money? #(GIVING_IS_BAD_1) melno008.ogg You are of course correct. We long ago abandoned currency, -and now only deal with commodities that have intrinsic value, such as valuable information +and now only deal with commodities that have intrinsic value, such as valuable information. #(giving_is_good_2) But our cause is just! Isn't altruism the highest pinnacle of morality? diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/mycon/mycon.txt b/sc2/content/comm/mycon/mycon.txt index 016b34c4a..43f5f95a0 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/mycon/mycon.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/mycon/mycon.txt @@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ A thousand of your species do not possess the richness in one of my cells. #(RAMBLE_3) mycon004.ogg I fill with my parents parents parents parents parents -I am they -- they are us. Then, and now. +I am they -- and they are us. Then, and now. #(RAMBLE_4) mycon005.ogg The Deep Children are part of Juffo-Wup -- home builders. @@ -108,9 +108,9 @@ when we are faced with such, we join, absorb and wait for our opportunity to learn the weakness that will allow us to Void the Non. #(RAMBLE_23) mycon024.ogg -At times, I meet another, who shares with me the life of parent inside the mind +At times, I meet another, who shares with me the life of a parent inside the mind and if we speak this fragment becomes predominant in the both of us -self meets self with occasionally enlightening results. +and self meets self with occasionally enlightening results. #(RAMBLE_24) mycon025.ogg The Podships thrum with the plasma containment field diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt b/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt index faf04d75a..0dfa3c988 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/pkunk/pkunk.txt @@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ Does it have little disgusting nodules on it filled with slimy viscous fluid? Only sometimes! What is the point? The point is clear! Make friends with other species. Even the nasty Charg beast cannot defeat a pack of Ibids -without the help of the help of 7 or 8 Wrinkle Dogs. +without the help of 7 or 8 Wrinkle Dogs. I think you see what I am getting at. #(WAR_GOES_3) pkunk073.ogg @@ -947,12 +947,12 @@ The Spirits now speak through me - I gaze with a strange intensity Ohhhhmmmm.... You will have a greaaat baaattllllle You will almost be destroyyyyed -but becuase you made friends with a certain birdlike race +but because you made friends with a certain birdlike race they will come to help you at the last minuuuute. Ah, the trance is past. #(FORTUNE_IS_3) pkunk117.ogg -I gaze into the all that will be. +I gaze into all that will be. I follow the tiny thread that is you, Captain. I see shining rocks that sleep. They are annoyed. Someone is making a great explosion of light. They awaken! diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt b/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt index fa374f150..d576fba51 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/utwig/utwig.txt @@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ However, the costs were high... very high. I should don the facial effigy of Remorse For Lost Comrades. #(GENERAL_INFO_AFTER_SPACE_2) utwig044.ogg -As you kmow, we were forced to withdraw from the Kohr-Ah offensive. +As you know, we were forced to withdraw from the Kohr-Ah offensive. Although we were able to make good account of ourselves, our casualties were high. In our attempt to balance the Doctrinal Conflict between the Kohr-Ah and the Ur-Quan we avoided the Ur-Quan; however they continued to engage us whenever possible.