diff --git a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt index 271881234..08ed786ac 100755 --- a/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt +++ b/sc2/content/comm/zoqfot/zoqfot.txt @@ -8,11 +8,11 @@ We come in peace, and with good will. #(WE_ARE3) zoqfo003.ogg But if you make one false move, you're vapor! #(WE_ARE4) zoqfo004.ogg -Don't worry, my companion is just a bit nervous +Don't worry, my companion is just a bit nervous... #(WE_ARE5) zoqfo005.ogg No, I'm not! #(WE_ARE6) zoqfo006.ogg -and argumentative. +...and argumentative. #(WE_ARE7) zoqfo007.ogg No, I'm not. @@ -115,22 +115,22 @@ In our ancient past, four species evolved intelligence on our homeworld. #(YEARS_AGO1) zoqfo039.ogg Simultaneously. #(YEARS_AGO2) zoqfo040.ogg -They were the Zoq +They were the Zoq... #(YEARS_AGO3) zoqfo041.ogg -the Fot +...the Fot... #(YEARS_AGO4) zoqfo042.ogg -the Pik +...the Pik... #(YEARS_AGO5) zoqfo043.ogg -and the Zebranky. +...and the Zebranky. #(YEARS_AGO6) zoqfo044.ogg We three, the Zoq, Fot, and Pik evolved in such a way -as to acquire sustenance from many sources +as to acquire sustenance from many sources... #(YEARS_AGO7) zoqfo045.ogg -from airborne zooplankton +...from airborne zooplankton... #(YEARS_AGO8) zoqfo046.ogg -from solar and ambient energies +...from solar and ambient energies... #(YEARS_AGO9) zoqfo047.ogg -and from rocky fungal clingers. +...and from rocky fungal clingers. #(YEARS_AGO10) zoqfo048.ogg Our favorite! #(YEARS_AGO11) zoqfo049.ogg @@ -141,9 +141,9 @@ and the Pik. #(YEARS_AGO12) zoqfo050.ogg To survive the predations of the Zebranky we banded together -annihilated the Zebranky +annihilated the Zebranky... #(YEARS_AGO13) zoqfo051.ogg -and formed the cooperative union you now encounter. +...and formed the cooperative union you now encounter. #(where_from) What do you seek from us? @@ -175,23 +175,23 @@ We are being blown to bits. Fleets of alien ships appear out of nowhere then unleash terrible destructive energies. #(UNDER_ATTACK4) zoqfo062.ogg -Fortunately +Fortunately... #(UNDER_ATTACK5) zoqfo063.ogg -they release these energies on each other. +...they release these energies on each other. #(UNDER_ATTACK6) zoqfo064.ogg -Unfortunately +Unfortunately... #(UNDER_ATTACK7) zoqfo065.ogg -they favor combat near strong gravity wells. +...they favor combat near strong gravity wells. Their stray shots regularly strike the surface of our planets often with tragic results. #(UNDER_ATTACK8) zoqfo066.ogg -Fortunately +Fortunately... #(UNDER_ATTACK9) zoqfo067.ogg -they have never found our homeworld, only our colony planets. +...they have never found our homeworld, only our colony planets. #(UNDER_ATTACK10) zoqfo068.ogg -Unfortunately +Unfortunately... #(UNDER_ATTACK11) zoqfo069.ogg -all of our colonies have perished as a consequence. +...all of our colonies have perished as a consequence. #(tough_luck) Hey, space is a tough place where wimps eat flaming plasma death. @@ -454,12 +454,12 @@ The black ship appeared in orbit several days ago and began raining down bolts of destructive energy on the surface of our planet! #(THANKS_FOR_RESCUE3) zoqfo151.ogg -Fortunately +Fortunately... #(THANKS_FOR_RESCUE4) zoqfo152.ogg -We were able to focus our planetary shields +...we were able to focus our planetary shields to deflect the energy blasts away from our cities. #(THANKS_FOR_RESCUE5) zoqfo153.ogg -Unfortunately +Unfortunately... #(THANKS_FOR_RESCUE6) zoqfo154.ogg Large sections of our planet's beautiful wilderness have been annihilated... entire ecosystems destroyed. @@ -611,11 +611,11 @@ to the sinister Kohr-Ah. Actually, that's good news. #(UTWIG_DELAY8) zoqfo200.ogg By focusing on the Kohr-Ah -who have been winning their war up to this point +who have been winning their war up to this point... #(UTWIG_DELAY9) zoqfo201.ogg They've been plastering the Ur-Quan. #(UTWIG_DELAY10) zoqfo202.ogg -The balance of power has been equalized somewhat +The balance of power has been equalized somewhat... #(UTWIG_DELAY11) zoqfo203.ogg But the Kohr-Ah will STILL probably win! #(UTWIG_DELAY12) zoqfo204.ogg @@ -774,9 +774,9 @@ Which have actually been QUITE SUCCESSFUL at killing us. #(ABOUT_OTHERS6) zoqfo255.ogg The only other starships we have encountered are strange tumbling red probes -which profess to be on a peaceful mission +which profess to be on a peaceful mission... #(ABOUT_OTHERS7) zoqfo256.ogg -But then attack like slavering Zebrankys. +...but then attack like slavering Zebrankys. #(ABOUT_OTHERS8) zoqfo257.ogg We believe that the probes are actually robotic scouts which have suffered some kind of malfunction @@ -852,9 +852,9 @@ and kick back and enjoy ourselves knowing that a Zebranky wasn't gonna jump out of the bush and eat us! #(ABOUT_PAST4) zoqfo275.ogg Well, we DID go back into the forest. -We stayed there for about five thousand years and had a great time +We stayed there for about five thousand years and had a great time... #(ABOUT_PAST5) zoqfo276.ogg -Then, one stormy day, a Zoq, a Fot, and a Pik were walking up a steep path +...then, one stormy day, a Zoq, a Fot, and a Pik were walking up a steep path looking for something good to eat, when a bolt of lightning struck nearby. With a huge flash of light, the bolt of energy carved a strangely-shaped chunk of granite out of a cliff. @@ -866,7 +866,7 @@ the grass caught on fire. #(ABOUT_PAST7) zoqfo278.ogg When the rock finally got to the Zoq, the Fot, and the Pik they simultaneously discovered the Wheel, Fire, and Religion -thus catapulting them on to the road of progress +thus catapulting them on to the road of progress. #(ABOUT_PAST8) zoqfo279.ogg Which has led us to this day, Captain. Oh! How did the flaming wheel give religion to our Culture, you ask?